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Topic : Being creative is more important in finding the best solution to a problem than planning carefully.
Man is a witty animal on the Earth. He has been bestowed with wonderful qualities, values to make his life better. He keeps on putting efforts to attain all his aspirations. His deep craving leads him to get hold everything which is beyond his grasp. Thus he plans to fulfill his wish. But sometimes, after burning candles at both ends, his endeavors go waste. Of course, at that moment his creativity, his latent talent opens all the doors and he is able to find the solution. His unwavering faith and indefatigable efforts help him to solve the intricate problems.
It reveals, if we behold in the past, Man was like a wild animal, lived naked in the forest and ate raw, uncooked food. It is said, “Necessity is the mother of invention” he discovered fire by rubbing the two stones. Of course his ingenuity and his creativity was the main source of that discovery.
That was the time, when we had been facing many problems-It took long time to cover the distances, we were unable to meet our relatives who lived far away from us but this problem has been solved because of our creativity. Today the world has lessened; the distance of one corner to the other end of the globe has diminished. We have made the world technically rich. Eventually, there is our creativity behind it.
Thus, it has no doubt, that being creative is more important in finding the best solution to a problem than planning carefully.
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