Topic 74: The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide...?

[Tung Lam]

Topic 74:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Essay:
Traveling is hobby of most people in the world because it brings people relaxed time and a lot of new knowledge about new areas. Although each people have their own ways to travel, I completely agree with the opinion that people should take part a group which led by tour guide in order to have a great trip because of its advantages, such as learning new knowledge, being enjoyable and convenient

To begin with, when we take part a group to travel, the tour guides will help us to learn more new knowledge. There is no doubt that the tour guide are professor in tourism, and they have a lot of understanding about people, culture and history of many places. As a result, during our trips, they can tell us about these knowledge and answer our questions when we see something which are new and strange. In this way, tour guide help us to enhance our knowledge while we are traveling.

In addition, our trips will become more interesting if we choose to travel in groups. If we travel alone, sometime we can feel bored because of being homesick or lonely. Nevertheless, when we go to travel with a group of tourists, we can meet a lot of new people and make friend with them. While we are on the way to travel, we can tell a joke to new friends, listen to their stories, share our emotion about nice landscapes, and we will feel enjoyable and comfortable until end of our trips.

Finally, we can take a fantastic trip thanks to tour guide. The main purpose of traveling is being comfortable and relaxed, and tour guide can help us get successful trips easily. They can help us to organize our trips, find hotels, restaurants and prepare all necessary things for a great trip. Therefor, the only thing we can do is to enjoy our trip with our families and friends.

In brief, traveling is so great, and I wish that I will have a chance to travel around the world. For the reasons that I have mentioned above, I believe that I will travel with a group which led by tour guide because of it is easy, convenient and comfortable.

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[Kitosdad]

[Thesun2003]

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Topic 74:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Essay:

Nowadays, people spent much time to relax and traveling. Some ones prefer to travel with a tour guide, others independently. I am pretty sure that both of these sides have advantages and I support my point of view further.

First of all, voyage with a guide is safer than traveling alone, because a guide has knowledge about customs and traditions of the country you visit and can explain where you may go and where you not. For example, when I was in Abkhazia a guide told me that I did not go to Kodorskaya street because it is dangerous.

Secondly, visiting other countries with a tour guide can be more interesting and impressive. A professional guide can choose very interesting itinerary which covers many sights. Additionally, he knows many places which people want to visit and many interested stories about it. On the other hand, you have to follow by a guide which can spend not enought time to see place or sight you want to see better.

Nevertheless, some people like explore our world alone or only with friends. I attend to think that this way for a trip is more comfortable than tour guide traveling because you do not limited only one itinerary and can spend as much time as you need to see what you want. However, traveling alone requires strong character and may be associated with greater risks.

To sum up, I prefer to travel without tour guide but I like to get some local tours in the place what I what to know better. I get more satisfaction when I get my trip with my friends and map.

[Katty2010]

Topic 74:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay:
Traveling is A hobby of most people in the world because it brings people relaxATION and a lot of new knowledge about new areas. Although each peRSON hAS HIS/HER own way oF travelLING, I completely agree with the opTION that people should tRAVEL IN A GROUP LED BY A TOUR GUIDE. ake part a group which led by tour guide in order to have a great trip because of its advantages, such as learning new knowledge, being enjoyable and convenient

To begin with, when we ARE take part OF a TRAVELLING group to travel, the tour guides will help us to learn more new knowledge. There is no doubt that the tour guideS are professIONAL in tourism, and they have a lot of understanding about people, culture and history of many places. As a result, during our trips, they can SHARE THEIR tell us about these knowledge and answer our questions when we see something which IS new and strange FOR US. In this way, tour guide helpS us to enhance our knowledge while we are traveling.

In addition, our trips will become more interesting if we choose to travel in groups. If we travel alone, sometime we can feel bored because of being homesick or lonely. Nevertheless, when we go ON A TRIP to travel with a group of tourists, we can meet a lot of new people and make friend with them. While we are on the way to travel, we can tell a jokeS to new friends, listen to their stories, share our emotionS about nice landscapes, and we will feel enjoyable and comfortable until end of our trips.

Finally, we can take a fantastic trip thanks to OUR tour guide. The main purpose of traveling is being comfortable and relaxed, and tour guide can help us get successful trips easily. They can help us to organize our trips, find hotels, restaurants and prepare all necessary things for a great trip. ThereforE, the only thing we can do is to enjoy our trip with our families and friends.

In brief, traveling is so great, and I wish that I will have a chance to travel around the world. For the reasons that I have mentioned above, I believe that I will travel with a group which IS led by A tour guide because of it is easy, convenient and comfortable.

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Nice Essay. You forgot to mention that a tour guide would help us not get lost in a new city or a new place.

Any way you need to work hard on your reading, grammar, and sentece structure.
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