| #2 (permalink) Sat Oct 02, 2010 17:02 pm Children should not have to work or help with household tasks. Agree or not?
|Hi Kitos, Thanks for correcting me, I try not to have problem in my conclusion!
It should be admitted that family members have diverse responsibilities at home. Children are not separated from this fact, and it is widely accepted that they have special duties, and one of the most, if not the most important ones, is studying. However, there has been a matter of debate among parents about other works that children should do. Some parents think that their children should only study in order to do best at school, while others conclude that children should handle different tasks. From my point of view, it is far more sensible for children to help with household chores.
In the first place, it is better to be mentioned that children should be prepared for their future lives in their childhood, which is mainly because every children will live without his parents one day, and no one knows what will happen to the family tomorrow, and the best place for learning valuable factors is in their home. Consequently, they will handle the obstacles which they will encounter in the future properly. To put the discussion in a wider context, consider a child who lost his mother. If he has not learned to do household chores, he will face major problems in his life. The more he has been prepared for living, the more he will solve problems.
Furthermore, working and helping with household chores, children learn to participate in events at home, and they are not indifferent with happenings there. Moreover, as is known to all, over the past few decades, the economic conditions of the society have driven mothers out to work, therefore, they do not have enough time to do all household tasks. Needless to say, every single member of the famil,y such as children, should help. As an example, my mother worked during my childhood, and I did a lot of work at home. Not only did I help her, but I also learned very precious tasks which I have used a lot. As a result, the best way to get feasible experience is to do work at home.
To sum up, based on the above discussion, parents should raise their children in such a way that they are taught many things in their childhood, in order to be prepared for their future lives when they will live alone. Indeed, having more than one responsibility, they learn to do different tasks at the same time.
Now, THAT is what I call a good essay. There were a few very small alterations called for that you will see if you review closely, but I am proud of your progress here Sarak.
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