subjects such as art, music, and drama should be a part of every child’s basic ed

[Golnazghaf88]

I agree with subjects such as art, music, and drama should be a part of every child’s basic education. The child can find his interest by learning these things early. The younger the child is, the faster he can learn. Help they mind stays sharp as they get older.
Everybody needs to find his interest whether it’s art or music. Teaching children these subjects can help them finding what they would like to learn or would choose for their jobs in future. I myself find music as my passion when I was in kindergarden where we were taught playing with instruments and traditional music was played during our launch hours.
The children’s mind is fresh and can learn more things. Children are eager to learn new things and what can be better than teaching them art, music or drama which can make them happy and they can enjoy all their life doing it?
Art, music, and drama help children’s mind stays sharp as they get older. I’ve read an article last week which said a research showed that people who knew how to play guitar were less in danger of getting the disease which people forget things.
In conclusion, learning art, music, and drama is beneficial for a child; it can help him find his passion or future job, it can help his mind staying sharp. Children are willing to learn new things especially ones which they enjoy doing

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[Kitosdad]

I agree with THATsubjects such as art, music, and drama should be a part of every child’s basic education. The child can find his interest by learning these things early. The younger the child is, the faster he can learn. THIS helpS THEIR mind TO stay sharp as they get older.
Everybody needs to find his interest IN LIFE(,) whether it’s art or music. Teaching children these subjects can help them finding what they would like to learn(,) or would THEY WOULD choose for their jobs in future. I myself FOUND music WAS my passion when I was in kindergarTen where we were taught TO playing instruments and traditional music was played during our launch LUNCH hours.
The children’s A CHILD'S mind is fresh and CAPABLE OF learnING MANY more things. Children are eager to learn new things(,) and what can be better than teaching them art, music or drama(,) which can make them happy and they can enjoy all their life doing it?
Art, music, and drama help children’s mindS TO stay sharp as they GROW older. I’ve read an article last week which said a research showed that people who knew how to play A guitar were less in danger of getting the disease WHERE people forget things.

In conclusion, learning art, music, and drama is beneficial for a child; it can help him find his passion or future job, it can help his mind TO staying sharp. Children are ALWAYS willing to learn new things(,) especially ones which they enjoy doing
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Good work Golnazghaf. I enjoyed reading this. Well done.

Kitos. 8.5/10
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Golnazghaf88]

thanks a lot