English to Spanish

[LuzBeliCo]

ORIGINAL

"I'm the hero of the story / (I) Don't need to be saved"
Soy el heroe de la historia, no necesito ser salvado

MODIFICACION

"I'm the hero of the story that doesn't need to be saved"
Soy el heroe de la historia que no necesita ser salvada.

Esta bien la modificacion??

Gracias ^^

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[Smvghost]

Hi,

I would use in stead of that ''who"
I am the hero of the story who doesnt need to be saved

Regards
Sergio