Do you agree or disagree? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.

[Pmjoker]

“wealth or knowledge? ” this is the most common topic of writing that we had in our child-hood and I remember this topic immediately after reading the question. Those days my answer was knowledge but today I have different opinion. As far as I am concerned, having money will help you to become successful person due to respect and fame which it brings, happily ever after and providing means to help the poor.

The first and for most reason I can provide is that money will definitely bring fame and respect for you and your family. The way people treat you is directly related to the way that they see you. An authentic view of this issue may shed light on some misjudgment. Consider a rich man who has the newest car which have been made as well as the best house in the best place of the city, people believe that this man is a hero and they even worship him as God! What I want to say is people respect affluent people more, therefore they become renowned and this is one of the keys of being successful.
In addition, money will bring comfortable life for you. With a myriad amount of money at hand, you can travel to all places in the world and enjoy the best hotels which can help you relax in this complicated world, Therefore, you will be healthier and money will assist you to become a calm person. in this way you can really experience happily ever after.
Furthermore, money helps you to help poor people around the world which can be mentioned as the best emotional feeling, thereby, you can think about your self as a useful person and feel successful. An elaborated analysis conducted recently shows that the affluent people who spend money helping other people may have happier life, Thereby, they live longer and enjoy their life time which is a sign of a successful person.

By and large, If all factors are contemplated, we can reach a conclusion that, by having an inordinate amount of money you can have a good life , fame and respect and ability to help others which are the definition of a successful person.

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[Kitosdad]

“Wealth or knowledge? ” this is the most common topic of writing that we had in our child-hood(,) and I rememberED this topic immediately after reading the question. Those days my answer was knowledge(,) but today I have different opinion. As far as I am concerned, having money will help you to become successful person due to THE respect and fame which it brings, happily ever after and providing means to help the poor.

The first and for most OBVIOUS reason I can provide is that money will definitely bring fame and respect for you and your family. The way people treat you is directly related to the way that they see you. An authentic view of this issue may shed light on some misjudgEment.
Consider a rich man who has the newest car, which have been made as well as the best house in the best placePART of the city(.) People believe that this man is aN hero(,) and they even worship him as God! What I want to say is people respect affluent people more, therefore they become renowned and this is one of the keys of being successful.
In addition, money will bring A comfortable life for you. With a myriad amount of money at hand, you can travel to all places in the world and enjoy the best hotels(,) which can help you relax in this complicated world, Therefore, you will be healthier and money will assist you to become a calm person. In this way you can really experience LIVE happily ever after.
Furthermore, money helps you to help poor people around the world(,) which can be mentioned as the best OF emotional feelingS, thereby, you can think about (yourself) as a useful person and feel successful. An elaborated analysis conducted recently shows that the affluent people who spend money helping other people may have happier LIVES. Thereby, they live longer and enjoy their lifetime which is a sign of a successful person.

By and large, If all factors are contemplated, we can reach a conclusion that, by having an inordinate amount of money you can have a good life, fame and respect and THE ability to help others(,) which are ALL the definition of a successful person.
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Not bad PM, but a little overstated. I know quite a few very rich, very sad people.

Kito. 8/10

Kitos. 8/10
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[Elnaziran]

Dear Kitosdad, Please let me know if you could revise my essay and your opinion about it. Thank you very much.

Success, satisfaction from life and fortune like as many other qualities matters are relative measures which are depend on human's feeling. This belief that money can bring success is common in all eras. In my opinion, money cannot play unique role to achieve fortune because of not sustainability the money, not sufficient for bringing success and different definition of fortune.
Primarily, money is unsustainable parameters. History has shown that many wealthy people had confronted with bankruptcy. Having lot of money sometimes may cause miserable. Actually, risk and danger for reach people is more than others. Many of wealthy people lose their money in large bids or huge investments in short time. In the other hand, children or inheritors in affluence families sometimes do not esteem of money; therefore, lose it easily.
In addition, many other factors are effective in bringing fortune. Being popular in people’s beliefs and even having satisfaction from type of progress are the other major factors. Knowledge, genius and persistency are essential for earning money in the correct way with honesty and decency. The ways of earning money are various. Some of them are logical and on the basis of right structure, but many of them might damage to personality, esteem and popularity.
Lastly, successful have many different aspects. Some persons believe that obtaining knowledge and science cause being successful while others believe that getting popularity and fame make a successful person. As a result, successful is a relative measure which has different dimension; therefore, it is possible that a wealthy person feel unsuccessful or have not satisfaction from personal life. Statistics has shown that divorce and separation between affluence couple is more than other. Really, successfulness depends on sense of each person.
To wrap it up, I believe that reach persons are not only successful people because money would be contemporary and is consumed easily. In addition, to achieve success, many other factors are needed; although, success is multi conception factor.