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[Shahinrasoulian]

Topic101: some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, regarding the fast growing aspects of industrialization and automation, humankinds are faced with the dilemma of whether to utilize machines in order to carry out their tasks or perform their tasks by hand. Lots of argues has been put forward about this issue. Speaking for myself, I tend to side with the former view for the following reasons.

To begin with, it could be asserted that, while using machines, doing works become more comfortable and easier. As a matter of fact, if a person utilizes the advantage of using machines, there would be no need to waste his energy, harm his body and his muscles any more. Therefore, completing a task would become easier. Moreover, the performer will not get tired and disgusted due to consuming energy. For instance, if a maintainer in a manufactory starts to do all works by hands, at the end of the day he would be so tired, and as a result, he is able to complicate limited quantity of jobs. Additionally, he would injure and harm his hands and arms. So, utilizing a machine is recommended for healthiness and freshness of worker.

Further, the most important advantage of using a machine is the pace and accuracy of doing a task. As while as, machines are using the force of electricity or fuels, they are more powerful than a man. Hence, the speed of performing would soar up significantly owing to this fact. In addition, machines can eliminate the humankind’s natural error because of the fact that a machine perform according to the order which is given to. To put it more bluntly, the machine does the exact program and accomplish the accurate goal which is pondered by the worker. On the contrary, human kind is not able to overcome his eyes or hands errors during performing a task by hand. Yet, machines bring us more accuracy.

To sum up, considering all aspects mentioned above, the advantages of exploiting machineries is many more than that of by doing a task by hand. Hence, I prefer doing a work by machines to performing them by hand.

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[Kitosdad]

Topic101: some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, regarding the fast growing aspects of industrialization and automation, humankinds are faced with the dilemma of whether to utilize machines in order to carry out their tasks or perform their tasks by hand. Lots of arguMENTS HAVE been put forward about this issue. Speaking for myself, I tend to side with the former view for the following reasons.

To begin with, it could be asserted that, while using machines, doing works become more comfortable and easier. As a matter of fact, if a person utilizes the advantage of using machines there would be no need to waste his energy, harm his body and his muscles any more. Therefore, completing a task would become easier. Moreover, the performer will not get tired and disgusted due to consuming energy. For instance, if a maintainer in a manufactory starts to do all works by hands, at the end of the day he would be so tired, and as a result, he is able to complicate limited quantity of jobs. Additionally, he would injure and harm his hands and arms. So, utilizing a machine is recommended for healthiness and freshness of worker.

Further, the most important advantage of using a machine is the pace and accuracy of doing a task. As while as, machines are using the force of electricity or fuels, they are more powerful than a man. Hence, the speed of performing would soar up significantly owing to this fact. In addition, machines can eliminate the humankind’s natural error because of the fact that a machine perform according to the order which is given to. To put it more bluntly, the machine does the exact program and accomplish the accurate goal which is pondered by the worker. On the contrary, human kind is not able to overcome his eyes or hands errors during performing a task by hand. Yet, machines bring us more accuracy.

To sum up, considering all aspects mentioned above, the advantages of exploiting machineries is many more than that of by doing a task by hand. Hence, I prefer doing a work by machines to performing them by hand.
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Not too bad Shahinrasoulian, but your work lacks clarity. Some sentences are poorly constructed.

Kitos. 7/10
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