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If I have come to realize the importance of education when I started a college... #1 (permalink) Fri Oct 22, 2010 5:36 am   If I have come to realize the importance of education when I started a college...
 

I am trying to get scholarships.
Could you check my grammar please?

topic: why are you deserve this scholarship? (limited 10 lines or 200 words)

If I have come to realize the importance of education when I started a college, you could’ve received this essay seven years ago.

I was not aware of the reality in this world before I got married and have a child.

Back then, education was a step I must take at my young age, and I felt that if I do not have any degree, people would look down on me.

As a result, I was not able to finish my college because I did not put my mind to it. My precious time just went on and my money was wasted after all.

Now, seven years on, I am writing this essay to fix my life.

I know it won’t be easy for me to start the school again at this point, however, if this scholarship is given to me, I won’t lose my second chance, my time and my money anymore!
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