Younger school children should be required to study art and music in addition to

[Carljefferson]

Satisfied with the opinion that younger school children shouldn't be required to study math language, science and history are those people who think it may be dispensable to learn art and music. Contrary to those people's perspective, my strong opinion regarding that statement is that younger school children have to be required to study art and music.

First and foremost, we may point out that art and music play irreplaceable roles in our society; we can see art or hear music almost everywhere in our life. Frank to say, I couldn't imagine what earth is going to be without them. To incite an instance, we can find art exist in our lamps, in our bottles, in our computers, or even in the flakes-the fairy of the nature. Also, we can find music hide in restaurants, in concerts, in our phone rings, or even in the chirps of birds hopping on the fences of our balconies. To make a hypothesis, if art and music disappear, how could we live? How could we enjoy our day? We would feel bored and meaningless. Lack of beauty in our life, we would understand it is significant to possess art and music. In conclusion, considering the importance of music and art, shouldn’t we give consideration to requiring younger school children to study art and music?

Another point worth mentioning is that, studying art and music not only means learning two new subjects, but also two kinds of media to discover, appreciate and create beauty in our life. As we know, art and music serve for delight, for ability, and for philosophy. Requiring children to study them is essential to our modern education. Nowadays, children need to learn the knowledge, which is able to launch the rocket to space, as well as the knowledge, which can assist us in finding our internal sound. What is more, when their knowledge structures are complete and skills are mature, inspiration will flow into their mind. Hence, it is necessary to get them studying art and music aside from math, language, science and history.

In sum, there is absolutely no reason for me to reject the idea that children should be required to study art and music, apart from math, language, science and history. By given the statement above, it is not ridiculous for me to conclude that children ought to learn more to have an idea of the definition of beauty.

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a Drama professor

[Kitosdad]

Satisfied with the opinion that younger school children shouldn't be required to study math language, science and history are those people who think it may be dispensable to learn art and music TOO. Contrary to those people's perspective, my strong opinion regarding that statement is that younger school children /have to be/SHOULD BE/ required to study art and music.

First and foremost, we may point out that art and music play irreplaceable roles in our society; we can see art or hear music almost everywhere in our life. Frank to say, I couldn't imagine what earth /is going to be/WOULD BE LIKE/ without them. To incite an instance, we can find THAT art existS in our lamps, in our bottles, in our computers, or even// in the flakes-the fairy of the nature. ???// Also, we can find music HIDING in restaurants, in concerts, in our phone rings, or even in the chirps of birds hopping on the fences of our balconies. To make a hypothesis, if art and music disappear, how could we live? How could we enjoy our day? We IT would feel borING and meaningless.

LackING of beauty in our life, we would understand it is significant to possess art and music. In conclusion, considering the importance of music and art, shouldn’t we give consideration to requiring younger school children to study art and music?

Another point worth mentioning is that, studying art and music not only means learning two new subjects, but also ANOTHER two kinds of media to discover, appreciate and create beauty in our life. As we know, art and music serve for delight, for ability, and for philosophy. Requiring children to study them is essential to our modern education. Nowadays, children need to learn the knowledge, which is able to launch the rocket to space, as well as the knowledge, which can assist us in finding our internal sound. What is more, when their knowledge structures are complete and skills are mature, inspiration will flow into their mindS. Hence, it is necessary to get them studying art and music aside from math, language, science and history.

In sum, there is absolutely no reason for me to reject the idea that children should be required to study art and music, apart from IN ADDITION TO math, language, science and history. By given the statement above, it is not ridiculous for me to conclude that children ought to learn more to have an idea of the definition of beauty.
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Quite a good essay Carl.

Kitos. 8.5/10
TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a Drama professor[/quote]
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[Carljefferson]

Thank you very much for your great effort!