What do you think a person would like and dislike about living in your town?

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A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

Last month, my mother told me that one of our distant relatives wanted to move to our city. He thought that living in the city will bring him numerous benefits. Today, more and more people want to live in town for a better live. What cities provide to the dwellers is considerable convenient and enormous job vacancies.

Whether a man will live a high quality of life partly depends on the money he earned. In the country, the main income of a family is made by selling the crops they gained. The farmer plant crops all the year around and harvest in the autumn. If the weather is not suitable for planting, the crops they gained might be less. But in city, people need to worry about the weather. The comfortable working environments guarantee the white-color workers finish their job. Besides, the expending of the city also needs a lot of labors. So, people can find a job in the city easier over their counterparts who live in rural places.

In addition, city can provide a comfortable environment. The advanced facilities in city is more accessible to people. The shopping centers make sure city dwellers can by anything at any time. However, people who live in country can hardly buy merchandizes that is not available to country yet. So, if necessary, they must drive to the city and buy a lot of things that will be used in routine life. What's more, the various entertainment places in city make people easy to be relaxed. I always go to cinema to watch the newest films or gong for a walk in the central park with my friends. These all make me feel relax after a day's study. For children and senior citizens, living in town means they can get a overall medical treatment. Both equipments and doctors' skills there are advanced, so the healthy sequence can be guarded careful.

Many people argue that rural life is peaceful and simple. Man can embrace the nature and get more fresh air. However, in my opinion, I'd rather spend my vacation there than dwell there, because city can provide me a better life.

In sum, city is a place that is better for human's life.

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Hello, Kitos.
Thanks for your correction.
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TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture by a professor of Sociobiology

[Kitosdad]

A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

Last month, my mother told me that one of our distant relatives wanted to move to our city. He thought that living in the city would bring him numerous benefits. Today, more and more people want to live in the city for a better life. What cities provide to the dwellers is considerable, convenience and an enormous number of job vacancies.

Whether a man is able to live a high quality of life partly depends on the money he earns. On the country, the main income of a family is made by selling the crops they have raised. The farmer plant crops all the year around and harvests in the autumn. If the weather is not suitable for planting, the crop they reap might be less, but in the city, people have no need to worry about the weather. The comfortable working environments guarantee the white-collar workers finish their job. Besides, the expanding of the city also needs a lot of labourers. Therefore, people can find a job in the city easier over their counterparts who live in rural places.

In addition, a city can provide a comfortable environment. The advanced facilities in every city are more accessible to people. The shopping centers make sure city dwellers can buy anything at any time. However, people who live in the country can usually never buy many items that are not available in the country, so if necessary, they must drive to the city and buy a lot of things that will be required in their routine lives. What's more, the various entertainment places in cities make it easy for people to find relaxation. I always go to cinema to watch the latest films, or go for a walk in the central park with my friends. These all make me feel relaxed after a day's study. For children and senior citizens, living in town means they can get overall medical treatment. Both equipment and doctors' skills there are advanced, so the healthy sequence can be guarded careful.

Many people argue that rural life is peaceful and simple. Man can embrace nature and get more fresh air. However, in my opinion, I'd rather spend my vacation there than dwell there, because acity can provide me a better life.

In sum, a city is a place that is better for a humans life.

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This is a pretty poor effort. You obviously didn't bother to review your finished work, otherwise you would have seen the many silly errors you had committed. If you continue to take little care with your work I will ignore it. I want only your very BEST work! Review this edit very carefully, and post a far better essay next time.

KItos. 7.5/10
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