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Too much time, money and energy are spent developing new technology. society should instead focus on maximizing the use of existing technology for immediate benefit

It goes without saying that creating each new technology employs too much time, money and energy. In fact, many people cooperate with each other and spend so much time to reach new technology. So, the society must focus on spread using of that technology to for compensating time, money and energy that were spent on that technology.
Needless to say, the purpose of each activity must be clear and logical at the beginning of it. Actually, in our society we can possibly see that many people do activities every day without having a specific aim. In conclusion, they will have an unpleasant feeling at the end of each day, so definitely this unsatisfied feeling will affect on them and will get depressed. Therefore, the best way to have good feelings is to have a specific goal and moving toward it.
Developing new technology needs to employ too much time, money and energy. Hence, the purpose of it is very important and vital. In fact, the more time, money and energy must spend on technology, the more the purpose of technology becomes vital and significant. In other words, the purpose of large decisions is more and more important than the aim of small decisions, inasmuch as large decisions need to employ much time and money and can possibly have more influences.

new technology has many aims such as saving time, saving money, accelerating works and so on. I think that the best way for compensating all of attempts in the process of creating novel technology is that the society must focus on maximizing the use of existing technology. One way is that the society encourages Medias that introduce new technology to all people and show the benefits of using that technology.
For instance, computer was a new and valuable technology that affects on our lives in different ways. In this condition it was an important society's task that encourages all people to use of computers and do their works with it. Day by day, more and more people find that computers have a very useful and valuable in their lives. Nowadays, people can buy their requirements through the connecting the internet by computers and do business by it. In such way, they can possibly save time and do their woks whereas they are relax and at home.
Consequently, not only, the role of society to show all aspects of new technology is very important but also, the society with doing it's task can encourage inventors to make more and more new technology and support them through familiar all people with using of that technology.

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