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The famous person from history I would like to meet.



 
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The famous person from history I would like to meet. #1 (permalink) Wed Nov 24, 2010 13:05 pm   The famous person from history I would like to meet.
 

Time machine is the most fascinating dream that attracts me. If I could travel back in the history, I want to see a famous person and he is Albert Einstein.

As a student of the physics department, I am looking forward to go back to the beginning of 20th century which is the most exciting and significant period. The two theories have been discovered and change the world thoroughly. One is the quantum theory, the other is relative theory. And the person most attracting me is Einstein, who establishes both the quantum theory and relative theory. What is the more, the relative theory is all created by him alone which gives the Newton's law a paper of death. We can see that, he is such a genius that no one has surpassed him by now. Also, he is my idol and I have no doubt to meet him.

Besides his great reputation, I am longing for chatting with him. I have much confusion in the physics. For example, I am not sure about what the time is and what the relationship between time and space is. I think he, first originally combining the time and the space, will give me the accurate answer. In addition, the answer is not the point and the thinking will give me more inspiration. I am curious about his understanding of the nature and I will be more interesting about the physics and the nature after chatting with him.

Finally, his noble quality also attracts me. He hates the war and suggested America to create the nuclear weapon to end up the war during the 2nd world war. However, when he found that there were a large amount Japanese people dying from the weapon, he felt guilty and deeply depressed. I just want to tell him that he need not feel so guilty. We people in future never hate him because of his idea of nuclear weapon.

I am so excited to meet with Einstein even though I know that I cannot now. But in my dream, I am chatting with him all over the time. His spirit and thought is always lighting in my mind.
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Re: The famous person from history I would like to meet. #2 (permalink) Wed Nov 24, 2010 19:32 pm   Re: The famous person from history I would like to meet.
 

A time machine is the most fascinating invention that attracts me. If I could travel back in history, I would wish to see only one famous person and that is, Albert Einstein.

As a student of the physics department, I am looking forward to going back to the beginning of the 20th century which was the most exciting and significant period. The two theories have been discovered and changed the world completely. One is the quantum theory, the other is relative theory, and the person most attracting me is Einstein, who established both the quantum theory and relative theory. What is the more, the relative theory were both created by him alone which gives Newton's law a paper of death. We can see that he is such a genius that no one has surpassed him up till now. Also, he is my idol and I have no doubt to meet him.

Besides his great reputation, I am longing to chat with him. I have much confusion in physics. For example, I am not sure about what the time is and what the relationship between time and space is. I think he, first originally combined time and space, and can will give me the accurate answer. In addition, the answer is not the main point, and the thinking will give me more inspiration. I am curious about his understanding of nature and I will be more interested about physics and nature after chatting with him.

Finally, his noble quality also attracts me. He hates the war and suggested America to create the nuclear weapon to end the war during the 2nd world war. However, when he found that there were a large amount of Japanese people dying from the weapon, he felt guilty and deeply depressed. I just want to tell him that he need not feel so guilty. We people today never hate him because of his idea of nuclear weapon.

I am so excited to meet with Einstein even though I know that I cannot now. But in my dream, I am chatting with him all the time. His spirit and thought is always lighting in my mind.
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Not bad Albert. Please note that is is not "the" science, "the" nature", "the" physics.
There is NO NEED for the definite article here. I notice that many people of your nation write this way. It is incorrect in English.

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