#2 (permalink) Thu Dec 02, 2010 19:57 pm Re: The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual |
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| Channelee wrote: |
Good evening, Kitos. Many thanks for your time to review my essay. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual.
The prosperous industries not only lead to economy thriving, but also bring us some serious environment problems. Can these problems be disposed of by the individual? From my perspective, they are too complicated for a single person to manage. My reasons will illustrate my standpoint as follows.
First of all, in general, the area of the environment issue is too wide to be tackled as a personal responsibility. An example of this would be the water and air pollution. When the pollution is mentioned, the area is often not a few cubic meters, but thousands of cubic kilometres. Therefore, it is hard to ask a person to deal with such a huge area. Furthermore, some environment issues are not limited to only one country. For example, a number of rivers flow through a couple of country's. To clean up the polluted river, the countries need to work together to find a solution to their problem. Otherwise, there won’t be too much difference, and the river would be still dirty.
In addition, the factors of the problems are too complicated to be handled. The global warming is a good example. How to decrease the higher and higher concentrate of carbon dioxide in the air? It is an intricate question. It is related to CO2 discharging and consuming. CO2 derived from factories, running cars and so on. To control the discharge, the factories and cars need to renew energy to replace the fossil fuel. To enhance CO2 consuming, the well known way is to increase the covering area of forests. Neither procedure can be managed by the individual.
To sum up, the individual can hardly handle the environment issue, since the related areas are huge, and the environment issues are truly complex. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Not too bad Channelee.
Kitos. 8/10
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