integrate writing

[Nocturnalj]

The lecture is mainly discussing that the number of the birds in the United States will not decline . Obviously challenging what is state in the reading material that is the amout of the bird will decline because of the upsurge human population and the developing agriculture.

Firstly, the professor demonstrates that urban development offer a larger and better place for other types of birds.Such as sea gulls and pigeons.That means, the amount of the birds will enhance, rather than decrease. While the reading passage supports that the continueing expand of human population and settlements will destroy the bird’s habitats.

Also, the professor indicates that the increasing of the agricultrue activities will do harm to the habitats of birds, however,in fact in the United States less and less lands are used in agriculture. Because of the introduction of productive crops. There is no need to destroy wildness areas which birds live in. Nevertheless, reading section insist that the development of agriculture will destroy the birds habitats.

Finally, the profesor believes using of pesticides will not influence the bird. She gives two changes of using pesticides.Fisrt, the new pesticides are much less toxic,so the bird will not be poisoned.Second the newly productive pest resist crops are unattractive to the pests,and it does not hurt bird at all. But the reading material persists that the pesticides will prevent the birds from reproducing .

TOEFL listening discussions: How is the young woman financing her education?

[Kitosdad]

[Nocturnalj]

But I think I have try my best, Kitosdad.I think I have no space to improve.could you please give me some more specific details of my weakness

[Kitosdad]

If you read the edited version of your essay you should recognise all of your faults. Perhaps that is your weakness, you never review, simply look at your score and think it is OK.
Nobody can help you if you don't at first try to help yourself. You have to read everything you can get your hands on.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Nocturnalj]

ALL RIGHT THANK U KITOSDAD