women are better driver than men

[Seasand80]

Hi Kitos,

Would you help me to correct my mistakes? It is summary-response essay.
I 'm not satisfied with conclusion but I don't know how to give kicker to the reader.

Thanks for your help.
Seasand

The reading explains why women are better drivers than men. According to the content of the lecture, men are worst drivers than women because they don’t stop for directions, think that driving is a competitive race, tend to increase speed, drive car with only one hand. In my point of view, I believe that women are safer drivers than men because they don’t drink, smoke and hog the fast land.
First of all, mend tend to approach to the fast lane when rush hours. Men consider good driving not in terms of how safe you are but how fast you can go. Men seem to take the attitude that if they drive slowly it means that they are bad drivers. Unlike men, women are always drive slower drivers than men and they consider how safer they are. Women consider driving a car just a way they use transportation to go somewhere. However, men care about speed and think that driving is same with competitive race.
Secondly, most of women don’t smoke cigarette when they drive. Conversely, over fifty percent of men use smoke when they drive. It means that men use only one hand to control a car. It is really dangerous to use one hand to operate a car. If something happens suddenly such as pedestrian crosses the street, how men change speed or wheel when only having one hand to control a car? Women always use two hands to hold the steering. They can pay attention during the whole trip.
Lastly, men drink more than women. Every week, we hear the report from media or television that many men die as a result of drink-driving. Normally, if women drink and feel tired they will call someone to pick up them to go home. When men drink alcohol, it means that their vision, perception and reaction will be reduced. Not only drunk-driving is dangerous but also other the drivers can be dangerous because drunk-driving may hit their cars.
Men always think that they are better drivers than women; however, in my above evidences which can prove that women should be defined as best drivers. We will be safe when sitting in a car with driver who doesn’t drink and smoke, and encroach on the fast lane.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture by a professor of Sociobiology

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