Why is music important to many people ?

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Question: People listen to music for different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Music have been playing an important role in human life since million years ago.It has a special masic that help us enjoy the life to full. It seems very clear to me that music can make us fell relax and bring us the most colorful time next to your relatives or friends.
First of all, it is unquestionable to say that music can make the felling of strees disappeared. In the modern time, people have to struggle with many proplem such as the occupation, family or their studies...these kind of problem sometimes strees us out. In this situation, a little spent-time for music will solve you all of problem. Take my experience for example. After examiations, i usually listen to music in order to free all of pressure.
Moreover, Music can help us to enjoy our life to full by bringing us colorful times. There is no party without music. Imagine that you planed to have a little meeting with your friend after a hard-working week, which is better a tea party with little music? You can also telling joke or giving advice for one another. Another non-music-party will be a very bored and unrememberable party.
In general, althought we sometimes forget the existing of music, it is something that very vital in our life. You will hard to live a happy life without music because music make us more love our life.
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