 #2 (permalink) Mon Dec 20, 2010 0:00 am Went late |
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Hello Mohammad,
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| Please I need your help to correct me if I wrote grammatical mistakes in this message. If you can also correct these first sentences to learn many benefits. |
I need your help to correct any grammatical mistakes that I might have written in this message please. If you can, would you also correct these first sentences so that I may benefit from the teaching.[/quote]
Some students went to arrived at the college so too late today. The Doctor insisted on not to allow them get in that they should not be allowed into the class to be exist in for the lecture. Because
The lecturer told them, "If you came come late to the lecture I will prevent you to enter from entering. So r Return to your homes and I will decrease subtract 1 mark for from each one of you.
The students returned to their homes so sad. They deserve what have has happened to them because they don't care for study and they are just playing and neglecting the lectures.
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| Wait your corrections and thanks a lot |
I await your corrections and thanks a lot.
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