#2 (permalink) Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:03 am Re: Choose one of the following transportation vehicles |
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Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives. 1. Automobiles 2. Bicycles 3. Airplanes Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I believe automobiles were crucial in the development of today’s society. It is possible now to provide a delivery at home. One of the best qualities of travelling by car is the comfort. This creation has become a sport, which brings racers to a new level of experience.
First, a big number of deliveries are made by post agencies. They use automobiles to accomplish their tasks punctually. People from all levels of society can find a use for this service. For example, there are many people who have physical disabilities. They are unable to leave their homes. Nowadays, they overcome their problems by trading over the Internet. It is now much easier to buy a desired item and received it in time at your door.
Second, cars can provide a very safe and comfortable journey. You and your family can travel to a vacation or just visit relatives in another country. Automobiles are now designed to protect people. They have a variety of devices that protect the passengers, therefore it is quite safe to travel. In addition the seats are made to provide the best experience. The driver is less tired which is crucial during long trips.
Third, the introducof cars brought with it the sport of car races. The idea of driving at high speed attracts many youths. Many entrepreneurs invest money into developing this kind of sport. Although it is quite expensive to run a team in F1 or other lower divisions, most of the businessmen who have done so have managed to increase their wealth.
All in all, there is no doubt that automobiles are essential to our life. Many people are delighted with them. Cars are one of the biggest innovations in modern life. However, it is our duty to be careful when using them on the road. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: You had the right idea Neacel, but were lacking a little in vocabulary. Please review the changes.
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