smoking should ban in restaurants.

[Anil Kumar Yadav]

smoking should ban in restaurants

Smoking should not permitted in restaurents .It is restaurents duty to fully ban on smoking . Smoking not only afffect the smoker but also secondry smokers with equal effects as comes to know by recent studies.
Secodly ,in restaurants every dish have a special pleasant aroma of spices which are responsible for apptite but smoke ,which is presnent ,is absorbed by the food stuffs ,due to this aroma of dishes is changed & food become tasteless .
So in conclusion, smoking should be totaly proscribe in restaurants to make a pleasant atmosphre .

please evaluate this is my first essy writing.

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[NguyenTrg]

Hi, Anil. Before Teacher Kitos corrects your essay, I think you should check your topic title. It should have been written : Smoking should BE banNED in restaurants. Also, pay attention to punctuation: I mean you must leave a space after every comma and full stop, please see the changes

[Our Tort System]

Guys, do any of you know how to spell "restaurant"?
=)
The essay is fraught with spelling errors, as was righteously noted. Using a spell checker can make a world of difference when it comes to composing essays. Hehe.
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[NguyenTrg]

Well, I just pointed out one of his/her mistakes, because it is Kitos' job, not mine. I just do anything within my limited ability, and suggest him/her to check those mistakes. OK?

If you want, there are more :


restaurents
afffect
secondry
Secodly
apptite
presnent
totaly
atmosphre .

I think everyone can find out these mistake with a glance, just hope he/she note himself/herself them as Kitos wants us to do.
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