 #2 (permalink) Thu Dec 23, 2010 9:37 am Re: What famous person in the past would you like to meet? |
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Please correct this essay for me, Kitos. Thanks in advance
What famous person FROM the past would you like to meet? Explain why and what you would like to TALK about?
If I could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, I would like to meet Marilyn Monroe. I would see her beauty WITH MY OWN eyes, and ask her some questions about her life and her career.
Needless to say, Marilyn Monroe was one of the most glamorous women in the world. I have watched many films IN WHICH she STARRED. She was so beautiful with the telling eyes, the attractive lips, and the perfect body. I am eager to know whether or not she was as beautiful in real life as she was in films.
Marilyn Monroe was one of the most famous actresses in the twentieth century. Not only WAS SHE known for HER beauty, she WAS also known for her acting skills. She acted naturally, and professionally. If I met her, I would ask her about her acting skills, whether these skills were her instinct or trained skills. She might give me some useful advices to improve my acting skills, because I am studying a drama course. Another thing I want to ask her is if she had chance to change, whether she WOULD choose to be an actress again or not, because it not only made her well-known for her talent, but also for the notoriety.
Her scandals with her husbands and her unusual style made her notorious. I am curious to know more about that because I might have some valuable information that nobody ELSE KNOWS. Perhaps, after I meet her and talk to her, I might know more about her life, and find out the real reason THAT led to her mystical death.
To tell the truth, although Marilyn Monroe is my favorite movie star I have not known much about her. Therefore, IT IS NOT surprising that I would like to meet Marilyn Monroe if I could travel back in time. If I met her, I might know more about her because she was beautiful, famous, and notorious. It would be an inspiring experience to meet her.
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A very well written essay Sonia.
Kitos. 8.5/10
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