#2 (permalink) Thu Dec 23, 2010 15:23 pm Re: A/D In the busy and crowded world today, we should not expect people to be po |
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Many thanks in advance. ^^ A/D In the busy and crowded world today, we should not expect people to be polite to each other?
With the development of society, an increasing number of people are beginning to think that whether people should be polite to each other or not. Some people assert that politeness is vital to a successful person today, while others have A negative attitude toWARD this issue. Despite many diversified opinions aired by different people based on their own concern about this issue, there can be no doubt that being a polite person is a good way for people to FOLLOW until now.
First of all, a polite person can be happier than people who are always rude to other people. That is to say, people who HAVE A polite manner can INTERACT well with others, and all of them would BE in A good mood. To put this point into an actual context, my father is a manger of a large company, but he still treats each of his employees very POLITELY. Therefore, people who around him like HIM very much and they can work in a good atmosphere. There is no gainsaying that people should put more effort INTO BEING a polite person in today’s COLD world. Another thing worth mentioning is that a polite PERSON can receive more help when he needs other’s assistance. Polite people always have appropriate behavior and words, and they would ALWAYS BE considerate toward others, therefore, they can make many friends. On the contrary, impolite people don’t care about others feelingS and treat people rudely and people don’t like to get along with them. As you can IMAGINE, people are willing to support the people who are polite toward others rather than the discourteous person. That’s why I am greatly convinced that politeness should put in the limelight in this busy world.
With the reasons above, I hold that polite people gain many advantages no matter in todayS or AN earlier society. That’s not to say, of course, that other points of view are completely without merit. However, I hold that the reasons I have provided in favor of my viewpoints are stronger. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Good work Erica. A few changes made, but still good.
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