#2 (permalink) Fri Dec 24, 2010 14:32 pm Re: An early memory of my childhood |
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| Alfonso wrote: |
Hi dear coach. Please score me. I'd like to thank you for your effort to help me and other myriad English learners.
I might have been four or so WHEN my family MOVED inTO a big old house full of kittENS. Although I PLAYED WITH them all day long, at night those cats gave me a terrible fright with their loud struggling noise. When they shrieked loudly, I was so petrified that I could not move, let alone cry or awaken my parents.
By the time I mentioned earlier, my parents used to go ONto our house's FLAT-roof to sleep at night. It must have been A remarkable moment for them; they talk for an hour with each other and because the sky was so clear they could have seen the twinkling stars and the shining moon in really nice weather. Thus, they tried not to lose any single night IN cheerING themselves up. If there had not been those ominous cats nearby, I could not have found any single annoying issue about it, and it likely would have turned OUT to BE one of my MOST pleasurable childhood memories.
Actually, I hated to sleep under the stars just because of the cats’ noise, and whenever my parents tried to ready themselves by taking fabric floor covering and the beds, I pretendED to watch TV. I disguised my real feelings towards sleeping out there. One night, when my mother found me imploring HER not to go out THERE TO SLEEP, she realized that THERE must BE something wrong with me. She embraced me, which I did not really like, and asked me to tell her the truth. When I said my fear of THE cats’ terrifYING screams IN THE night FRIGHTENED ME, she replied that a CHILD who is under the aegis of his parents would not be afraid of anything at all. Afterwards, my parents used to hug me and tell me some stories to keep my mind off those frightening cats' sounds. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Thank you for sharing that Alfonso.
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