The advantage of samll and big universities.

[Sweetcandle]

Merry chirsmas kitosdad :D i wish u a happy chrismas with your family and friends.
this is my second essay for TOEFL exam i worte it in 45 min. i kept in mind the capital letters is important and i try not to make a mistakes.
please correct my essay and give me your opinion :)
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Some students prefer to attend a small university. Others prefer to attend a big university. Discuss the advantages of each. Then indicate which type of university you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

People are different. Although some people had a lot in common It’s impossible to find
someone who is one hundred percent like you. We have different thoughts and needs. Some love to be the center of the attention while others prefer to be alone or in quite places. For those reasons some student may prefer large universities while others prefer small one.

Usually, the big universities have a big classes and a lot of courses that may not be available in small one. Many people attend big universities because of the diversity of the academic courses and programs. Others may chose it because of the diversity of people religions and nationalities which will allow them to meet new people from different countries. sometimes these universities offers a big nice dorms for the student not to mention the large library with different books that will help students in their researches and homework’s.

In contrast, a big dorm and library will not be found in the small universities nor the diversity in programs. But the good thing about it that it contain few people which will allow students who have a difficulties in learning to focus and understand. It is perfect for student who hates crowded classes. For those reason I prefer to study in small universities.

To sum up, the size of the university is not what defined whether it is a good or bad place yet it’s important to pick up universities that’s right for our needs.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two students in their dormitory during registration week

[Kitosdad]

[Sweetcandle]

Thanks kitos .. i'll keep trying until i get 10/10 :P