Football game

[ARt.]

Football game is assumed since long times the best game in the world.Millions of people watch it every day,look through some video frames by internet,wait for special TV-show which parses any football event.Football born in an England but we might say that it has completely developed in Sough America,in particular Brazil and Argentina.These countries always made a famous players like Pele and Maradona.To tell you a true they have been always fighting each other for the best player and nowadays someones consider Brazilian the best,others Argentinian.Step by step football turned into huge international game and then appeared one organization is called FIFA.It provide all of the challenges in the game and created some rules the countries and clubs should follow them.Most significant challenge in football is World Cup where gathering 32 teams after big classification included much more teams.So,they are going to define the best team playing each other until there will only one winner team.And last championship which took place in Africa won Spain team.In fact it was fist organization experience for this continent countries and i think they made it with highly professionalism.Although there were serious terr-act where died a lot of Gana's residents.Well let they rest in piece and i think they were proud to know how their team played.Despite this i think South Africa has done their job great and there is only wish good luck to them in their football life.

Well i were appreciate if somebody check my essay.I already know i did some grammar mistakes and that is my weak side.Anyway that is the first time i have written essay here and i wish is not last

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a bookstore sales clerk and a student

[Kitosdad]

A good attempt to write an essay that was spoiled by poor punctuation and poor sentence structure. You write as you speak, which is not good. You should be spending your time reading more. That will definitely improve your work.

Kitos. 7/10
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