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[Daniel_Guan]

Scientists believe junk food is damaging to our health. Some people think the solution to this issue is educating people about the harm of junk food. Others argue that it is not the right answer to the problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Answers:
People get to know the harms engendered by junk foods, thanks to the scientific discoveries in recent years. Many of them believe that it could reduce the amount of intake to a low level through educating individuals the contaminations such foods contain. There are also many other opposite views.
The obvious evidence that supports those be for educating comes from the knowledge and wisdom brought by educating. As scientists revealed, the chance of cardiovascular diseases and diabetes would rise if junk foods were fed on over a certain frequencies within a period of time. Many people ignore the fact not because of their carelessness about their health but their unawareness of the bad results of sustaining on such foods uncontrollably. The educating informs them the adverse effects and inculcates them the right diet habit.
Those who oppose it have their supporting proofs. In present modern society, most individuals engage in handling their work and personal life in such a fast pace. That is to say, few would spare a little time on preparing a good meal for themselves and their families. The long distance from work to home would take them more than 2 hours each day. As a result, after work, they inevitably have no time to treat a good dinner due to the fatigue imposed by the long travel.
My opinion is that education is the basic step while other actions should be taken immediately. The first step was to notice the contaminations in the junk foods and put this knowledge and skills of avoiding them into children’s textbooks. More than that, we should make good design for constructing good communities and working blocks and the connecting roads between them. We would build a better infrastructure to reduce the commuting time. Only when residents had enough time to cook themselves a good meal on the condition they enjoyed the process, they would dump the junk foods out of their lives.

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