earthquake

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There has been a great struggle between people as well as nature since human beings' first apperance on the earth. Many countries have been confronted with earthquakes which are natural disaster have serious effects on the lives of individuals. After a disaster people themselves homeless besides, many disasters result in deaths and they casualties.

To commence with, one of the most severe effects of disasters is that many people die and may get injured. In the MARMARA earthquake, for instance, a wide region affected and a lot of buildings collapsed. They become graves for people who lived there. There are individuals who may be considered lucky owing to their survival but they will live with the effects of earthquake. Perhaps they would remain disabled. In brief, all the people who experienced a disaster like that encounter a lot of problems which are really difficult to solve.

Another important effect of disasters is that people will remain homeless. Their house collapse or turn into ruins where it is impossible to live in. Therefore, many people have to live outside in tents. People who are vulnerable there subject to cold, rain, diseases. They cannot find the comfort of their homes. Moreover, there is not enough food supply. Adults can endure hunger, but children cannot. Besides, there is no clean water to drink.

To conclude, earthquake is natural and inevitable. It has serious and painful effects on peoples' lives. These individuals have to live outside in misery, having no food, no cloting. Many of them die, and the survivors encounter many problems, which are really difficult to handle.

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