How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific

[Deliaceanga]

Nowadays people give importance to television. Through television people get informed with news around the world. Standing in front of the TV became a way of relaxing after a hard day at work. In my opinion these is not good. It is known that mass media can control people’s mind, and opinions. Not everything that it is seen on TV is true.

To begin with, from television we hear a lot of information, but it is up to us to sort it. Not everything that we hear and see is true. There are a lot of lies. For example, in the last couple of months it has been related that the end of the world is close. It is said that in 2012 the Apocalypse will be here. And there are related a lot of ways of how this it will happen. How we will die. These information had scared a lot of people. Due to that, persons not so brave, decided to take their life before the Apocalypse came.

Secondly, parents these days have to work not only at their office but at home too. This is why, when they need some quiet moments, let their children in front of TV. It is true that, usually, the TV is turned on, on cartoons. In fact cartoons are not so inoffensive as we thought. The famous Disney cartoons are not so loved as they used to be. Donald Duck, Mickey Mouse and all of their friends, became history. Now they are replaced with Bakugan, Superman, Spiderman and other shows where people fight. Are mad on each other, and they never reconcile. It is true that Tom and Jerry were always fighting, but in the same time the show was amusing. Therefore these new type of cartoons children start to fight with other children. This will influence the behavior of youngsters for all their life.

To conclude, TV is not good for everyone. We must not let television to lead us! He have to be the leader. The one that chooses what is true and what is not, for what to bend our ear, and for what not.

Here we go. Thank you!

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a student and his counselor

[Kitosdad]

Nowadays people give importance to television. Through television people get informed with news FROM around the world. Standing in front of the TV HAS became a way of relaxing after a hard day at work. In my opinion THIS is not good. It is known that mass media can control people’s mindS and opinions. Not everything that it is seen on TV is true.

To begin with, from television we hear a lot of information, but it is up to us to sort it. Not everything that we hear and see is true. There are a lot of lies. For example, in the last couple of months it has been BROADCAST that the end of the world is close. It is said that in 2012 the Apocalypse will be here, And there are a lot of ways SUGGESTED TO NJUST how this it will happen. How we will die. THIS information had scared a lot of people. Due to that, PEOPLE WHO ARE not so brave decided to take their LIVES before the Apocalypse COMES.

Secondly, parents these days have to work, not only at their office, but at home too. This is why, when they need some quiet moments, THEY let their children SIT in front of THE TV. It is USUALLY true that the TV is turned on, BUT ONLY FOR cartoons. In fact cartoons are not so inoffensive as we thought. The famous Disney cartoons are not so loved as they used to be. Donald Duck, Mickey Mouse and all of their friends, became history. Now they are replaced with Bakugan, Superman, Spiderman and other shows where people fight, OR are mad on each other, and they never reconcile. It is true that Tom and Jerry were always fighting, but AT the same time the show was amusing. Therefore BECAUSE OF these new typeS of cartoons children start to fight with other children. This will influence the behavior of youngsters for all their life.

To conclude, TV is not good for everyone. We must not let television lead us! WE have to be the leaderS. The one that chooses what is true and what is not, for what to bend our ear TO OR not.
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Pretty good Deliaceanga. Structure needed changing slightly, but still good.

Kitos. 8.5/10
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[Deliaceanga]

Thank you!:)
Delia