Integrated essay

[Sonla]

Hi, Mr Kitos. This is the first time I have written integrated essay and I surely I have some mistakes in organization, vocabulary, structure and met difficulties to write an integrated essay. Therefore, I hope you spend more time correcting carefully this essay for me. I will use the corrected essay as a sample for next times. Some people advice that I need to a standard sample to follow; it will help me save time in writing integrated essays. Thanks in advance!

In the lecture, the professor makes several points about what is actually the first grain food in human history. The professor argues that beer rather than bread was the first grain food, which was eaten by humans several decades ago. However, the reading contends some proof proving that breed came first. The professor’s lecture cast doubt on the reading by using a number of following points.

The first point professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that early people did not need to grind wheat to make beer. According to the professor, wheat would be sprouted naturally in the moist environment without any effort from humans. This differs from the reading. The reading states that in order to make bread, early people must grind wheat seeds first. Then, wheat paste was sprouted by putting it sit in the open. The professor disbelieves the reading because the first steps to make beer are simple and nature than making bread. Therefore, people obviously made beer first.

Also, the professor mentions that the fermentation in making beer is very fast. This differs the reading which indicates that fermentation made people think to bake the bread. The point made by the professor casts doubt on the reading because with the fast fermentation resulted in foam, people will taste it as first beer.

Finally, the professor claims that prehistoric man did not know how to use fire to cook
However, the reading states after grinding to have wheat paste, people must bake it into bread. This point makes doubt because people have just used fire for cooking in many tens of decades; early people did not cook things.

In conclusion, the points made in the lecture contrast with the reading. What the professor speaks demonstrate that bread as the first grain food in human history is in doubt.

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