Is loyalty important in a relationship?

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hi everyone & hi kitosdad .I am new to this forum. I am from france .I am learning english as a second language. I wrote a essay about loyalty in a relationship .Can someone correct my grammer mistakes in my essay please and give your opinion about my essay and give a mark mark to my essay.

Question: loyalty is an important aspect for a relationship or not?

Loyalty means the quality or state of being faithful.Many human beings expect loyalty from the people in their lives.Loyalty is one of the most stressed aspects of a relationship,which generates a great deal of heated debate ,with supporters maintaining that loyalty is an important aspect of a relationship whilst opponents claim that loyalty is not a big deal.Quite frankley, I tend to think that loyalty is important in a relationship.

To begin with , The absence of loyalty in any type of relationship can lead to a number of personal and social problems. For example , when inloyalty causes a divorce, the children may be negatively affected by the split. Issues involving loyalty can also lead to jealousy, fear and anger in both parties. This could in turn lead to destructive patterns, such as domestic violence, mental illness due to insecurity and paranoia within a relationship, and expensive lawsuits.

Secondly , Loyalty is important to any relationship as it is an indicator on the trust and value that both patners place on it.This idea can best be illistrated by an example.For instance ,Loyalty is of momentous importance in a mariage partner .Since the mariage life is a huge commitment for the couples who cloose each other as an overlasting life partner , without loyalty it will turn out to be a strrugle rather than a tranquilizing life.so we can say that the expectation of loyalty within a marital relationship is an unwritten rule.It is similar to a contract .When a contract of trust is breached, the marital relationship can fall apart.

In conclusion , let me say that loyalty is very important in a relationship.In today's society, loyalty is something that most people no longer pay mind to. It has become so common to lie or cheat in a relationship that it is not looked at as a loss of moral values for most of today's modern and more liberal society. Hopefully with time I hope that most people will realise that loyalty is one of the most important values and make the world a better place to live.

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[Vieestbelle]

thank you very much kitosdad . By the way happy new year to u and your family ! byee