#2 (permalink) Thu Dec 30, 2010 17:53 pm Re: Independent essay: Mobile phone |
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Topic: advanceS in transportation and communication like the airOplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. choose another technological innovation that you think is important. give specific reasons for your choice.
At the turn of THE 21th century, many amazing innovative inventions have changed the way people interact with each other in a global society. I firmly believe it is the mobile phone that HAS MADE a great contribution to the progress of human beingS.
Firstly, the mobile phone makes it easier when life gets hard. People USE their mobile phoneS to contact with others everywhere and ANY time they like. Not only ARE THEY useful to keep in touch with family members, but also mobile phones have been used in a variety of events of an emergency. For example, organizations which aid victims of domestic violence may offer a cell phone to potential victimS without the abuser’s knowledge. These devices become an indispensable part in meeting victims’ urgent needs. Thanks to mobile phones, victims in unexpected situations are no longer waiting random help from outside.
In addition, the mobile phone has a crucial role to play in the process of economic development, or just lifting the poor out of poverty by making an impressive connection between people. In this constantly changing world, THE PERSON who can update information by taking advantage of the mobile phone as fast as possible is usually the most successful businessmen. Indeed, cell phones enable people to conduct their businesses much more convenientLY and blisteringLY by helping them communicate with others immediately. FAR FASTER than letters or even e-mail which we must expend a lot of time in reading and answering. More remarkably, modern mobile phones support a huge number of wonderful services, such as SMS messages, e-mail, Internet access and GPS. With the help of these necessary services, life seems to be much easier.
Although some people deem that the mobile phone radiation has an adverse effect on human health, it has became an important part in meeting essential needs. ............................................................................................................................. Not too bad Lemin.
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