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#2 (permalink) Thu Dec 30, 2010 18:00 pm Re: Awards and prizes are given for excellence in various fields. |
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Awards and prizes are given for excellence in various fields. Do these awards and prizes serve a useful purpose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is clear that rewards are valuable for people’s life. Our modern society provides many remarkable awards such as THE Nobel prize and Best Handwriting. They serve as an inspiration, appreciation and financial GOAL for people dedicated to their work.
It is indeed very important THAT scientists and working people receive awards. It is momentous to receive any kind of appreciation. Everything that shows agreement to his work is pleasing. It makes the PEOPLE who are rewarded to feel delight. It is a great pleasure to know that someone approves your work. It refills your body and mind with positive energy. Many scientists can see that their work is useful to the daily routine of the ordinary person. He can find new solutions which are beneficial to all of us. It is very blissful to know that someone is actually working somewhere out there to improve your life.
In addition, it is undoubted that money is a crucial factor IN modern life. People who work need better labs and devices which can significantly improve their way of working. It is OBVIOUS that if you do not have the PROPER environment to work IN it is almost impossible to achieve something remarkable. You can maintain a normal and standard way of working, but the most remembered innovations require a strong foundation. This base is a better facility and working materials. For example, nowadays there are many innovations. News AGENCIES report all the time about new discoveries about artificial life. It is because governments have a strong budgeT financing people committed to creatING something better.
Moreover, when people receive a reward many teenagers can see this act. They can be at school and just choosing which way to follow. However, if youths see this very grateful ceremony they can desire to become like this some day. As a result the future generations can benefit from it. Many devices and innovations can put the life of the future person in a better position. Awarding a prize is also a great way the most educated students feel support. Even a small reward can be essential to motivate pupils to keep working.
Some may argue that awards can be used for inappropriate aims. A huge amount of money is always an object of crimes. Therefore, many scoundrels can use it as a way to obtain a fast earning. However, most of the prizes are reviewed by a committee. They strictly follow the rules and do not allow mistakes to happen.
Thus, it is clear that rewards are very beneficial for people. Society cannot be devoid from this humane act. Thousand of diligenT individuals need to know that their work is very important to the modern person. ............................................................................................................................. Pretty good Neacel.
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#3 (permalink) Thu Dec 30, 2010 19:23 pm Awards and prizes are given for excellence in various fields. |
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| I read a lot more... and it is easy for me to find my words. This essay contains 450 words. I have never before wrote so long essay. |
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#4 (permalink) Thu Dec 30, 2010 19:47 pm Awards and prizes are given for excellence in various fields. |
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Reading is the way forward as I am always saying. Problem is, not everyone listens as you have done. Congratulations. See the effortless difference! _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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