Students who keep rooms their neat and organized are more successful

[Herculeshut]

Do you agree or disagree with the statement:
Students who keep rooms their neat and organized are more successful than those who do not.

Students have to manage many things around them like studying materials, clothes or other equipment. Thus, the way to organize everything in their room is very important. A good way will help them to find something easily and save their time. Also, this influences much on the personality of each student. That’s why students having a neat and organized room are more successful than students not doing this.
First, when everything in their room is arranged well, students will not waste time to find any material that they need to study. Everything is in its place. And whenever students want, they simply go to that place and get it. For example, in my university, some students always lost homework and textbooks in their room. And then, they are always late in each class due to finding them and miss almost the beginning that is the most important part in a lecture. In the end of semester, they often get the worst results in my class.
Moreover, the way to organize something always affects their personality. If they manage everything in their room well, they will manage their work in their life well, too. Or if they care much more about their room, they will careful in every situation that they face with in the future. These characteristics will help them very much in their career. For example, a businessman that has these personalities will consider all contracts carefully, discover all problems in them as well as deal with them efficiently. Therefore, he reduces his risk in business and get more money than other one.
In conclusion, students that organize their room well will become more successful than the other students. They will reduce their time to find anything when everything is in its right place. In addition, organizing room well make them have some good personality both in their work and in their life. Therefore, the way to manage everything in room is very important and a valuable thing to learn.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a professor and his student

[Kitosdad]

Do you agree or disagree with the statement:
Students who keep THEIR rooms their neat and organized are more successful than those who do not.

(Hercule, it is vital that you get your topic title correct.)

Students have to manage many things around them, like studying materials, clothes or other equipment. Thus, the way THEY organize everything in their room is very important. A good way will help them to find something easily and save their time. Also, this influences much on the personality of each student. That’s why students having a neat and organized room are more successful than students not doing SO.

First, when everything in their room is arranged well, students will not waste time IN TRYING to find any material that they need to study. Everything WILL BE in its place. Whenever A student wantS ANYTHING, they simply go to that place and get it. For example, in my university, some students always LOSE THEIR homework and textbooks in their roomS. Then they are always late in each class due to WASTING TIME finding them, and miss the beginning OF THE lecture. THIS IS USUALLY THE MOST IMPORTANT PART. AT the end of semester, they often get the worst results in my class.
Moreover, the way to organize something always affects their personality. If they manage everything in their room well, they will manage their work in their life well, too. Or if they care much more about their room, they will BE careful in every situation that they face with in the future. These characteristics will help them very much in their careerS. For example, a businessman that has these TRAITS will consider all contracts carefully, discover all problems in them as well as deal with them efficiently. Therefore, he reduces his risk in business and EARNS more money than otherS.

In conclusion, students that organize their roomS well will become more successful than the other students. They will reduce their time to find anything when everything is in its right place. In addition, organizing THEIR room well makeS them have some good personality both in their work and in their life. Therefore, the way to manage everything in YOUR room is A very important and valuable thing to learn.
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Not too bad Hercule. Review the edit carefully.

Kitos. 8/10

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[Herculeshut]

Thank you so much, Kitos