Togetherness- A poem from a non-native

[Mohammad64]

Hello,

I wrote a poem. What is your idea about it? I know that it may make you laugh :), because I had not written any poems in my life even in my native language.

You had gone and I supposed everything was done,
I silently cried for losing you every single night
I had to hide what was going on deep inside me in front of others
and laugh as if I was the happiest human on the Earth
Baby, I used to see you everywhere
and smell your sweet scent in every garden,
When you left me behind the last day, I died,
but suddenly you came back to me with teardrops falling from your bright eyes.
Now, you and I are together,
and that's all thing that I wanted, namely .... togetherness.
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[NguyenTrg]

Hey, it is very very niceeeeee ^^. Go ahead with more poems my friend ^^.
Happy New Year
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[Kitosdad]

Remarkable Mohammad. Truly remarkable. Well done.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Mohammad64]

Thank you very much Kitosdad and Nguyen. I will try to write more. I want to write some stories as well :)
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If you need help, on a windy night, be sure to leave a candle burning so a friend can see the light.