Should teachers talk their social or political views to student in the class?

[Yecochi]

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Topic:
Should teachers talk their social or political views to student in the class?

Some people agree that teachers discuss their social or political views in the class, while others oppose them to do so. Education serves the function to make individuals to survive in the society. Although students can learn about the society from that kind of topics, there is something more important for them to learn. In my opinion, teacher should endeavor to assist students to study knowledge and find out their aspiration, rather than talking their social or political views in the class.

First, the commitment of teachers is to delivery basic knowledge to students. Through education, students learn various kinds of knowledge so that they would be qualified to become a professional after graduation. In this process, teachers should help them to learn with higher efficiency. Teachers will not only give assignments and tests to strengthen the learning effect, but also answer the question in studying.

Although a teacher's comment on society appears useful knowledge for students, it indeed wastes students' time in learning. The process of studying basic knowledge takes a lot of time. To teach that knowledge would almost use up the time in a class, which is even not enough for teachers to achieve the essential commitment thoroughly. Therefore, teachers' opinion about the society should be put aside.

Further, besides teaching knowledge, teachers should assist students to find their aspiration toward their career. In this step, teachers should interact with their student actively, instead of just expressing their own opinion. Teachers should try to realize their student more, encouraging him or her to talk about his/ her opinion. Therefore, students would better identify their characters, and thus put themselves in the right position in the society.

Students should learn fundamental knowledge and discover their aspiration through education, rather than learning their teachers' opinions on the society. Teachers should assist students as much as possible to learn essential knowledge and find their suitable position in the society. Therefore, there should be no time available for teachers to discuss their points of view on the society and politics in the lecture.

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[Kitosdad]

Should teachers STATE their PERSONAL social or political views to studentS in class?


Some people agree that teachers SHOULD BE ABLE TO discuss their social or political views in the class, while others oppose THE IDEA. Education serves the function OF PREPARING individuals to survive in TODAYS society. Although students can learn about the society from THOSE kind of topics, there is something more important for them to learn. In my opinion, teacherS should endeavoUr to assist students IN studyING THEIR SUBJECTS knowledge and find out their aspiration ASSESSING THEIR FUTURES, rather than talking ABOUT their social or political views in the class.

First, the commitment of teachers is to delivery IMPART basic knowledge to students. Through education, students learn various kinds of knowledge so that they would WILL be qualified PREPARED to become a professional after graduation. In DURING this process, teachers should help them to learn with higher efficiency. Teachers will not only give assignments and tests to strengthen the learning effect, but also HELP IN answerING the questionS. in studying.

Although a teacher's commentS on society appears useful knowledge for students, it indeed wastes students' time in learning. The process of studying basic knowledge takes a lot of time. To teach that knowledge would almost use up the time in a class, which is even not enough for teachers to achieve the essential commitment thoroughly. Therefore, teachers' PERSONAL opinionS about the society should be put aside.

Further, besides teaching knowledge, teachers should assist students to find their aspiration toward their careerS. In this step, teachers should interact with their studentS, actively, instead of just expressing their own opinionS. Teachers should try to realize MOTIVATE their studentS more, encouraging him or her THEM to talk about his/ her THEIR opinionS. Therefore IN THIS WAY students would better identify their characters, and thus put themselves in the right position in the society.

Students should learn fundamental knowledge and discover their aspiration through education, rather than learning their teachers' opinions on the society. Teachers should assist students as much as possible to learn essential knowledge and find their suitable position in the society. Therefore, there should be no time available for teachers to discuss their OWN points of view on the society and politics in the lecture.
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Good morning Yecochi. You wrote a lot, and yet said what could have been said in half the time. Try to be more concise. You repeated many of your points, and wasted time in reinforcing your opinion.
1. We are in school to learn, not to listen to the teacher's opinion.
2. It is not a teachers role to expound his own opinion, but to form our own opinions.

That is all that was required.

Kitos. 7.5/10

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[Yecochi]

Topic:
Should teachers talk their social or political views to student in the class?
Should teachers state their personal social or polotical views to students in class?

Some people agree that teachers should be able to discuss their social or political views in the class, while others oppose the idea. Education serve the function of preparing individuals to survive in today' s society. Some people agree that teachers discuss their social or political views in the class, while others oppose them to do so. Education serves the function to make individuals to survive in the society. Although students can learn about the society from those kinds of topics, there is something more important for them to learn. In my opinion, teacherS should endeavor to assist students IN STUDYING THEIR SUBJECTS to study knowledge and find out their aspiration ASSESSING THEIR FUTURES, rather than talking ABOUT their social or political views in the class.

First, the commitment of teachers is to delivery impart basic knowledge to students. Through education, students learn various kinds of knowledge so that they would be qualified to become will be prepared to become a professional after graduation. In during this process, teachers should help them to learn with higher efficiency. Teachers will not only give assignments and tests to strengthen the learning effect, but also help in answering the questionS in studying.

Although a teacher's commentS on society appears useful knowledge for students, it indeed wastes students' time in learning. The process of studying basic knowledge takes a lot of time. To teach that knowledge would almost use up the time in a class, which is even not enough for teachers to achieve the essential commitment thoroughly. Therefore, teachers' opinions about the society should be put aside.

Further, besides teaching knowledge, teachers should assist students to find their aspiration toward their careerS. In this step, teachers should interact with their students actively, instead of just expressing their own opinions. Teachers should try to MOTIVATE realize their studentS more, encouraging THEM him or her to talk about their his/ her opinionS. In this way Therefore, students would better identify their characters, and thus put themselves in the right position in the society.

Students should learn fundamental knowledge and discover their aspiration through education, rather than learning their teachers' opinions on society. Teachers should assist students as much as possible to learn essential knowledge and find their suitable position in society. Therefore, there should be no time available for teachers to discuss their own points of view on society and politics in the lecture.

[Kitosdad]

Bravo.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.