 #2 (permalink) Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:06 am Re: Compulsory Attendance |
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Compulsory attendance has become a controversial issue in Turkey in recent years.The government desires to extend compulsory attendance over almost all universities despite reactions of opposition. In this regard, I entirely advocate that compulsory attendance should be extended all over the TO ALL schools, as there are favorable aspects of compulsory attendance in terms of chance to communicate with teachers and AN increased success rate.
To begin with; chanceS to communicate with teachers, It can easily be asserted that individuals who make an effort to learn anything could learn it more easily with the aid of a teacher. On the contrary, even though they show a great determination, students who are HAVE tried to understand aN issue alone may not entirely gather FULLY UNDERSTAND THE COMPLEXITIES OF it. This case IS only related to THE learning processes of people.
When it comes to increased success rate, it is an indisputable fact that the INCREASED communication between teachers and students increaseS, the more succesable SUCCESSFUL AND ENJOYABLE activities will become. For instance, in university entrance examS, numerous private schools have gained ascendancy over public schools, Because of DUE TO the fact that thEy have special classes which are THAT consist of A lessER number of studentS according COMPARED to public schools. Thus, these classes enable teacherS to communicate with their students closely MORE EFFECTIVELY.
On the other hand, some people claim that compulsory attendance brings about to REstrictS the freedom of students. However, they turn a blind eye that just as Students SHOULD have freedom to spend their time on their hobbies, BUT they SHOULD also DEMONSTRATE some compulsions, such as; studying AND being successFUL IN fulfilLING their responsibiLities. Should they neglect their responsibilities, they could SHOULD not have freedom to do what they want.
All in all, taking everything which are THAT HAS BEEN mentioned above into consideration, THE chance to communicate with their teachers and THE increased success rate can be regarded as the positive aspects of compulsory attendance. In my opinion, the government should pursue a policy to increase the rate NUMBER of schools which are applied THAT SHOULD IMPOSE compulsory attendance ON THEIR PUPILS.
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Good morning Ibra. Quite a good essay, but slip-shod punctuation. Reviewing your work would probably have alerted you to quite a few silly errors. You can do better than this.
Kitos. 7.5/10
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