children of different abilities should be educated together?

[Lobbve]

Dear,Mr. Kitos
Would you please give me some advice. Thanks very much

9.Some people think that children of different abilities should be educated together. Other people think that it’s better to teach the intelligent children separately and with special treatment. What do you think? use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Obviously, in most cases people need schooling. But the certain situation of every single student is different. Some students are wide and could learn everything in a minute while some others can hardly gain knowledge even teaching them repeatedly again and again. Therefore, it is necessary to analysis whether intelligent students should be taught separately with special treatment or educated with the others together. (64)

Teaching intelligent students separately has a vast amount of advantages to both students and teachers. One the one hand, it can greatly boost study efficiently to intelligent students and extend their potential ability as possible as they can. Without wasting time on repeat again and again, intelligent students can go deeper on the path of pursuing knowledge. And discussion with smart companion in a competitive atmosphere can stimulate their power and spirits. On the other hand, teachers also benefit from it. For teachers, they do not need to consider about those students who fall behind. Teacher is somewhat similar to a tailor. They can only make one shirt and everyone in the talent class would be fit. (117)

However, separate education also comes up with disadvantages which could not be overlooked. Firstly, it is not good to culture good characteristics. Some students in talent class would have sense of superiority and, then, they would be proud and despise peers in a common level. Also, intelligent students would not play a good role in a group work in their future. Evidently, they would get used in cooperating with smart partners and there would not be such partners in their future. (81)

As far as I am concern, separate education is a better option to an intelligent student. I was in a talent class in my high school and it fits me very well. That competitive atmosphere spurs me a lot or I would never get where I am. (47)

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