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#1 (permalink) Sun Jan 02, 2011 18:35 pm There is nothing that uneducated person can teach an educated person. |
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Education is important notion in a person’s life. Education enriches the knowledge, outlook and behavior of person. If you look at the behavior of educated and uneducated person, you can see the differences easily. I strongly support idea that educated person can teach the uneducated person. It is because, educated person read more, improve his or her knowledge and is always in the development process. People strengthen their knowledge and improve their awareness about scientific issues by reading. Reading more help people to be clever and keen. Such kind of people can give advises to the uneducated person in different situation and find solution to the difficult problems. Today people try to possess knowledge and be professional in one of the field of science. Educated person tries to improve and get more knowledge on his profession. It is because, when you know that this person is a specialist in the medicine, you will ask advises from him, not from uneducated person. In conclusion, I can tell that people who get education differ from the uneducated people in their behaviors. Uneducated people are not tolerant in difficult situations and do not give appropriate reactions to the problems. Educated people can develop their personal characters to the positive directions, if it is needed. That is why, taking into account above mentioned, I think that uneducated person cannot teach an educated person.
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Lilly1234 I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#2 (permalink) Sun Jan 02, 2011 18:46 pm There is nothing that uneducated person can teach an educated person. |
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I am really hoping to see an improvement in the work of you all this New Year. You still have a limit of two essays a day, but if you feel you need to write only one per day to show an improvement, so much the better. The vast majority have it within them to write really good essays about their topics. Take your time. Think what you want to say. Think about how you intend to say it, then review it in your mind once more before beginning to write. Scores will be more stringently applied this year. Poor work will be scored as low as six. If you get nine, which is going to be really difficult, make sure you write even better in your next essay. Your goal is TEN, always strive for it. It is achievable, and all of you have the ability to achieve it. Remember what I have said repeatedly ... reading is your way forward.
If anyone submits a second essay without awaiting the edit of the first, then both essays will be ignored. All corrections will be done so that you can easily find them by reviewing the edit. You don't have to rewrite your work, just make sure that you don't repeat the same mistake again. If you still have not mastered punctuation, then spend an hour or so in doing so. It isn't brain surgery ... just do it! Topic titles should be checked for correctness. Posts without topic titles will also be ignored. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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Kitosdad Language Coach

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#3 (permalink) Sun Jan 02, 2011 18:50 pm Re: There is nothing that uneducated person can teach an educated person. |
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| Lilly1234 wrote: |
Education is important notion in a person’s life. Education enriches the knowledge, outlook and behavior of person. If you look at the behavior of educated and uneducated person, you can see the differences easily. I strongly support idea that educated person can teach the uneducated person. It is because, educated person read more, improve his or her knowledge and is always in the development process. People strengthen their knowledge and improve their awareness about scientific issues by reading. Reading more help people to be clever and keen. Such kind of people can give advises to the uneducated person in different situation and find solution to the difficult problems. Today people try to possess knowledge and be professional in one of the field of science. Educated person tries to improve and get more knowledge on his profession. It is because, when you know that this person is a specialist in the medicine, you will ask advises from him, not from uneducated person. In conclusion, I can tell that people who get education differ from the uneducated people in their behaviors. Uneducated people are not tolerant in difficult situations and do not give appropriate reactions to the problems. Educated people can develop their personal characters to the positive directions, if it is needed. That is why, taking into account above mentioned, I think that uneducated person cannot teach an educated person. ............................................................................................................................. A very poor effort Lillly. You really need to do a lot of reading to improve your knowledge of English composition. There is a lot of help available here on the Forum. Take advantage of it. Read, read, read.
Kitos. 6/10
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