#2 (permalink) Tue Jan 04, 2011 10:55 am Re: Real Democracy |
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In recent years, in our country, there is HAS BEEN A controversial issue over whether real democracy could be possible in countries where there are educated people or not. Some elite authorities strongly advocate this issue. However, this HAS RESULTED IN A huge reaction from avarege MOST people in society. //In this regard, it is crucial to say that neither education is an indicator of ascendancy among individuals nor it enables to people scorn others.//(Confusing.)
To begin with, it can easily be asserted that the notion of democracy compels to individuals TO show respect for educational, social and ethnic diversity of people. Every ALL people have different opPortunities in their lives. For instance, a wealth of individuals are obligated to BE born and grow up in Insufficient economical and social conditions. Thus, they may have no chance to take ACQUIRE a good education. Nevertheless, THE right to vote is one of the chief MOST IMPORTANT OF human rights. Therefore, on no account are they preventED from voting.
When it comes to another aspect of the issue, a great number of people who suffer from lack of freedom live in every country. Just as AN educated person demands to have much more freedom, uneducated individuals also desire to have much more freedom at the expense of their lives. In this respect, the sense of freedom is not a special emotion of educated people. People who make a considerable effort in order to gain their democratic rights constitute THE vast of majority of the society. Should we consider the right to vote as a indicator of ascendancy, this case means that we could not understand the notion of democracy properly.
On the other hand, it is alleged that uneducated people are not close to public affairs. However, they neglect such a crucial points that political and social events have an important effect on people's lives, and uneducated individuals also are influenced BY these events. In this sense, it can be undoubtedly said that because of the fact that uneducated people usually live IN worse economic conditionS than educated individuals, they are certainly aware of economical and political developments.
In conclusion, taking everything which are THAT HAS BEEN mentioned above into consideration, real democracy does not MEAN that only elite or educated individuals should have right to vote. Moreover, all the people in the society should learn how to reach an agreement in democratic debates, regardless of elitist attitudes. ............................................................................................................................. Not bad Ibra, but I found it confusing in parts.
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