Do you agree or disagree with following statement? People are never satisfied wit

[Sarasimp]

The dreams of people change over time. Their wills alter from time to time. The main important thing is that they always want to achieve something; every person want to be different, that is why they want to gain something different. I think that is a natural process for the people not to be satisfied what they have, and always try to achieve something more. It is because they know that the world which surrounds them has a lot of possibilities to provide their dreams. The other reason is that the life is beautiful and every person wants to use all his opportunities to see all beauties of life.
The world which surrounds us has a lot of possibilities to provide our dreams. God has created for the living of people so many things that every person wants to gain all of them. They want to try all of these opportunities which God gives us. People think that may be when they die it will be late to try all those.
The other reason is that the life is beautiful. The life is so beautiful that everybody wants something more for themselves, their families , their children, their friends. When they gain something good in their life they want to achieve another one. When they arrive at one level in their life, they want to step next level. Our world changing everyday and our dreams are changing with it.
In conclusion, I would like to say that what people have now are not satisfying for them. They would like to achieve something more. They want to be special; and, that is why people want something different.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture by a professor of Sociobiology

[Kitosdad]

The dreams of people change over time. Their wills alter from time to time. The main important thing is that they always want to achieve something; every person want to be different, that is why they want to gain something different. I think that is a natural process for the people not to be satisfied what they have, and always try to achieve something more. It is because they know that the world which surrounds them has a lot of possibilities to provide their dreams. The other reason is that the life is beautiful and every person wants to use all his opportunities to see all beauties of life.
The world which surrounds us has a lot of possibilities to provide our dreams.(Repetitive.)
God has created for the living of people so many things, that every person wants to gain all of them. They want to try all of these opportunities which God gives us. People think that may be when they die it will be TOO late to try all OF those.
The other reason is that the life is beautiful. The l Life is so beautiful that everybody wants something more for themselves, their families, their children, their friends. When they gain something good in their life they want to achieve another oneSOMETHING ELSE. When they arrive at one level in their life, they want to step UP TO THE next level. Our world IS changing everyday, and our dreams are changing with it.
In conclusion, I would like to say that what MOST people have now IS not satisfying for them. They would like to achieve something more. They want to be special; and, that is why people want something different.
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Quite good Sarasimp. An example here would have lifted your essay.

Kitos. 7.5/10

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