#2 (permalink) Tue Jan 04, 2011 16:38 pm Re: Universities should give money to their students' sports activities |
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I am really hoping to see an improvement in the work of you all this New Year. You still have a limit of two essays a day, but if you feel you need to write only one per day to show an improvement, so much the better. The vast majority have it within them to write really good essays about their topics. Take your time. Think what you want to say. Think about how you intend to say it, then review it in your mind once more before beginning to write. Scores will be more stringently applied this year. Poor work will be scored as low as six. If you get nine, which is going to be really difficult, make sure you write even better in your next essay. Your goal is TEN, always strive for it. It is achievable, and all of you have the ability to achieve it. Remember what I have said repeatedly ... reading is your way forward.
If anyone submits a second essay without awaiting the edit of the first, then both essays will be ignored. All corrections will be done so that you can easily find them by reviewing the edit. You don't have to rewrite your work, just make sure that you don't repeat the same mistake again. If you still have not mastered punctuation, then spend an hour or so in doing so. It isn't brain surgery ... just do it! Topic titles should be checked for correctness. Posts without topic titles will also be ignored.
OK, let's look forward to a really successful New Year, with lots of brilliant essays being turned in.
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Thank you vey much, Mr. Kitos. There are three points about the fact that sports are nessary in university. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. A healthy body is the cornerstone of personal development. There has been lots of research over the years concluding that physically active people are less likely to have serious conditions such as heart disease. If I got heart problem, obviously, much attention has to be paid to my health, generally affect my every field and walk of life: studying, working and living. Thus, physical activity is essential to maintaining a healthy body, which also means all- around and long-term benefits.
Another good thing is that sports teach us to learn how to corporate with other members in a team. As with most people, cooperative encouragement can make all the difference between winning and losing. So soccer, for example, is not an individual activity; if one team worked to encourage members to improve instead of discouraging them, this could be the difference between winning and losing. If a team wants a good performance, everyone in the team must master skills to care about what teammates are going to do and how to adapt to the whole team rhythm, ultimately, to reach the common goal. Last but not least, sports provide a wonderful platform to communicate with others. To verify this point Olympic Games serve as an example; people from different places will experience the joyful feeling of the fact that to connect with so many people. Besides, the same topic provides opportunities to make friends. Trust and respect between partners can be established with clap. Indeed, sports bring out easy ways of communication and provide us to make connect with people from different places but the same interests.
Thanks again.
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#3 (permalink) Wed Jan 05, 2011 8:34 am Universities should give money to their students' sports activities |
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I strongly agree on this topics. firstly, sports keep the body healthy and healthy body can give full effort to study. Not only that sports also keep the mind fresh which is the pre condition for study. That means sports is indirectly the little part of study. so university have to be confirmed the sports funding and activities. secondly , Lack of funding many students deprived of sports activities as a result they may pass their sports time with destructive activities. thirdly, When university will confirm the money for sports activities it might be well managed and well conducted. students can't get extra money for that purpose. Finally it can be say that it is very assential to give money to their students sports activities by the university. vast thanks Mr. kitos. Please Inform me about my level & suggest me. |
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