#2 (permalink) Wed Jan 05, 2011 17:34 pm Re: If you could make one important change in a school that you attended |
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If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
It is certainly clear that most of the schools are lacking a green place where students can refresh. This educational center is just one more TO ADD TO the list. A refreshment area can be supremely beneficial to pupils. Places like this inspire students to perform better at class. A change like it can give a chance learns to spend their energy. It can serve as ground for taking a lunch.
It is scientifically proven that open territories with a grass and trees inspire students to work. Many psychologists use this kind of atmosphere to perform their therapies. It is just QUIET and clear. The air gives you a chance to rethink the past events. Pupils can seat SIT down at IN the shining sun and study their lessons. They can use this time to improve their performance at IN class. Just like many great minds, learners can find great innovations. It can be just an improvement at their study process or in a new way THAT some mathematicAL task to be completed. There are so many possibilities of development around this splendid nature.
In addition, a huge number of teachers are upset about the discipline at IN class. This is because pupils are overfilled with energy. The refreshment area can be a fantastic place where students can spend their energy. After school a variety of games can be played such as basketball, football and tennis. If learners run AND move they IMPROVE their stamina. It can affect their focus during their lessons. Pupils can score better scores because they are more concentrated during their studies. Low marks are not always due to the fact students are not prepared. It is because they do not pay attention when the teacher is speaking. However, this can improved with one crucial change.
Moreover, people from this school have a problem with the place where they can eat their lunch. It is clear that A refreshment area can solve this misunderstanding. Many tables can be positioned on this ground. It will give a fantastic option where students can eat their breakfast. Moreover, they will be able to enjoy the fresh air outside. It is proven that eating amid nature will make you starve easilyIMPROVE YOUR APPETITE. Therefore, people will lunch often and their physique will develop. It will make them resistible to illnesses, and as a result pupils will not miss classes.
Some may argue that a place outside in nature can be dangerous. There is a National Park nearby which is inhabited by wild animals. However, the park is surrounded by netS. It gives safety to anyone spending his time outside.
Thus, it is undoubted that a refreshment area will be beneficial for everybody. Everyone needs to reconsider the importance of such area and successfully work on this project. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Not bad Neacel, but your lack of vocabulary is letting you down. Do more reading.
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#3 (permalink) Wed Jan 05, 2011 18:43 pm If you could make one important change in a school that you attended |
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