The invention of the internet has had negative effect .. agree or disagree ? (2)

[Richardsalience]

I disagree with the statement that the invention of the Internet has had negative ramifications. Personally, I think that the Internet, a new step in people's development, is a powerful database of all kinds of information. This step had unlocked the doors of many science discoveries that seemed chimerical before the Internet was invented. Internet prevalence branches out into two various fields: in society and in science. In society Internet is mostly seen as a chance of being in touch with friends, neighbors, and parents; as an example we can take into account such Social Networks as Face book, Twitter, and others. In science Internet takes its most part in space technologies, for instance, keeping frequency with astronauts clear.

The statistic shows that teenagers are using Internet very often. This is a beginning of all unfair speculations, unconfirmed notions, about viewing Internet as a noxious invention that lead to many appalling consequences. This truth is universally acknowledged that everything excessive is harmful, for example, excessive food lead to serious diseases; in this particular example, we can't conclude that "food has had negative effects". The same pattern is here. Using Internet too much, I mean surfeit of using Internet, is harmful and could be a cause of many mental and physical disorders. Therefore, Internet users are guilty for such disorders, not the Internet invention itself.

The importance of the Internet invention in science is difficult to overate. As mentioned above, the Internet in this field is mostly used in space technologies. It's hard to believe but no cell phones would be possible if there is no Internet. In my view, no Internet--no information. As New York Times newspaper highlighted their main thesis: "A wealth of information!". The same thing is here: "A wealth of Internet!"

If I asked to make an example when did Internet helped me I would mention the possibility of buying books On line. When I was preparing for the SAT, I needed to buy a couple of books; unfortunately, they were not available in my country and that's why I used the Internet On line shopping and bought the books that I helped me as well as the Internet invention.

Finally, the Internet invention hasn't had a negative consequences; on the contrary, as I see it, considering main points above, it was a great discovery of humankind.

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[Kitosdad]

[Richardsalience]

[Richardsalience]

Also
Can you show me essay that you gave 10/10?

[Kitosdad]

"a negative consequences"

The error is YOURS Richard. ConsequenceS is plural, therefore some/any is the logical match,
not "a".

If you think that 10/10 is impossible, you are not trying hard enough. I told you and everyone that the scoring was about to become more stringent. ("Things are about to change.") A few people have made 9/10. They are trying very hard to make TEN. This is everyone's target. If you don't like my strict regime ...............................
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