People consider living in large cities hard or uncomfortable. Why do you think th

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People consider living in large cities hard or uncomfortable. Why do you think this is so? What would you suggest to make improve this situation?

As a result of growing economies in the country some cities was developed to enormous size. This situation can lead to dramatic decreasing of living standard. In this essay I would give some explanations.
Firstly, many urban employed people spend more than two hours on traffic jam every day. This hours added to working time resulted that people do not work eight or ten hours a day. Furthermore, they spend about twelve hours outside the house. As a result they do not have enough time to themselves. This fact has a great influence on their living standard in negative way.
Others aspects, such as destroying parks or reducing green area in the cities lead to oxygen decreasing. For example, when a new building is built, a lot of grains or threes which produce fresh air are destroyed. Fresh air is only imaginations in a large metropolitan area such as Mexico City or Tokyo.
As far as I am concerned, moving a large factory from urban area is possible solution to increasing urban people happiness. If factory is not located close to place where workers live, they will settle on area around the factory. Decreasing habitants in cities is one example to reduce crowd which has negative aspect on living.
To sum up, for every issue exist solution and living in a large city is not an exception. Moving to rural area and searching for job in small cities is one solution.

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