 #3 (permalink) Fri Jan 07, 2011 13:47 pm Re: phone calls vs. e-mails which do you prefer and why? |
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Sending electronic mails is the best form to USE WHEN communicatING with other people. Several examples from the social sciences and current events prove that sending e-mails is an impeccable kind of reporting or questioning the information.
The Research made by The Social Science Department, gives the reasons and advantages why connecting people via e-mails is better than via phones.
The first advantage is that you can send emails in any time you want.
//Second, because, in case of urgency, to say important information you don’t need to wait until phone line will be free.// (Poorly written Richard.)
Third, archives of phone companies state that phone lines are more likely to get damaged than THE (I)internet, it interprets that if AN (I)nternet connection is failed FAILS, you can easily connect with another, but if A phone line isn’t working, you need to wait one OR two days until it CAN be fixed. This retardation could thwart important processes of negotiations between people. Thus, the research made by the Social Science Department (SSD) proves that the communicating though emails is the ideal way to be in touch with other people.
The case at “Maxwell & Max Tom Co.” represents Social Science Department’s pattern in use. The director and his employers were carrying bargains with other companies. //This company was preparing for remarkable disclosing of new bridge they have built.// (This too is poorly written.)
It was A stormy night before that event; consequently THE phone line was damaged and that’s why M&MT Co. couldn’t be in touch with other contractors, and THE company postponed the ceremony. Thus, the case OF “Maxwell & Max Tom Co.” confirms that phone connecting has got significant disadvantages in case of urgency.
If phone lines are damaged or unavailable, there could be more serious consequences than A delayed ceremony. For example, in A case of natural disaster, like AN earthquake OR A Tsunami, the phone lines, because of being too busy, fail. This happens because people in such cases are calling to their families, friends, or relatives in one ALL AT THE SAME time, and phone lines are not constructed to stand that VOLUME OF TRAFFIC.over that many calls. Instead of phone calls, we can use messages and emails. Hence, this instance exemplifies that messages and emails are more reliable than phone calls.
After careful analysis of the research made by the Social Science Department, the case OF “Maxwell & Max Tom Co.”, and an emergency case, one could see that electronic mails, indeed, are the perfect way of communicating with other people.
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This was a big come-down after yesterdays good work Richard. I think you were supposed to be drawing a distinction between these two forms of communication.
Voices being more personal than text, etc,.
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