#2 (permalink) Fri Jan 07, 2011 14:15 pm Re: young people enjoy life more than older |
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Nobody denies that young people have the chance to do different activities, unlike older people. Most of young people are healthy, happy and enthusiastic about life. They are eager to practice different activities. Whereas, older people might have health problems like diabetes, and Osteoporosis that make them unable to do the same activities that young people CAN do. I therefore firmly believe that young people enjoy life more than older people. On the one hand, being young gives you the chance to practice different activities. You can work-out more easily, drink and eat as much as you want. Moreover, when you are young it is easier for you to make new friendships. For example; my dad always brags about the number of friends he had when he was 17 years old, saying that he was the most popular student in his school. Therefore, the advantages of being young seem more compelling than those of being old.
On the other hand, there are numerous disadvantages of being old. First of all, your body wouldn’t make it easy for you to work-out all the time, and eat whatever you desire. Furthermore; when you are old, you would be stressed and nervous because of the heavy burden of life. You would be concerned about your children’s tuition fees, or your house mortgage. Not to mention the fact that you would experience times when nobody supports you, or HAS your back. Hence, being old is not the thing that we actually look forWARD TO. To put it all in a nutshell, it is obvious that young people enjoy life more than older people. Young people don’t think of life IN the same way that older people do. There are no logical reasons that would make them feel depressed, and tense. Needless to say, if older people got the chance to become young again, they wouldn’t say no. ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Simple and interesting. My kind of essay.
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