#2 (permalink) Sat Jan 08, 2011 8:28 am Re: Technology has facilitated our lives so much and given us a lot of freedom. S |
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Technology has facilitated our lives so much and given us a lot of freedom. Some people, however, believe that it has caused more problems for us. What is your opinion?
Modern technologies have changed the surrounding world very significantly, and people can use many advantages of progress. At the same time, new technical devices have brought many dangers for TO society, and the environment. Unfortunately, this tendency has changed the agenda of the present society, and people are forced to pay greatER attention to the ecological satiation of our changeable world.
First of all, it is important to emphasise the main merits of the present technologies. We are witnesses to the vibrant development of medicine, and life expectancy has grown principally. Moreover, modern scientists are able to realise the boldest dreams, such as the mastery of the cosmos. However, many researches suggest that present technologies create potential dangerS for our vulnerable world. Moreover, this problem has left the scientific laboratories. Nowadays, every person can give us many examples of THE consequences of human's actions, such as The Chernobyl disaster or polluted soil in some countries. The aspiration of people to improve facilities and to make our lives easier is absolutely understandable and sensible. In spite of these wishes, society should be responsible for the consequences of THE pioneering ideas of scholars. In fact, the majority of technogenic disasters could be avoided by more precise work of people. For instance, the Chernobyl disaster was caused by the mistakes of technical personnel. This is a good example of THE importance IN findING the balance between new technologies and THE potential disadvantages of using them.
In conclusion, it is vital to highlight the key points of the present discussion. Modern technologies have gone CAME A long way and THE fruits of this progress influence us very controversially. However, some negative consequences of the improvement include big dangerS for the present generations of people and their descendants. At the same time, there is a solution to this problem, for instance, to try controlling and managing more precisely and responsibly new technical devices, because this is the only way to minimise the negative consequences of progress. ............................................................................................................................. An impressive essay Svyatoslavkn.You are beginning to shine.
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