#2 (permalink) Sat Jan 08, 2011 13:28 pm Re: for and against the internet |
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| Gulcan01 wrote: |
FOR AND AGAINST THE INTERNET In today's world, with the development of technology, the (I)nternet has become inevitably BECOME AN important element in our lives. The (I)nternet contains both negative and positive effects on us. People have argued that the internet brinGs people of the world together closer TOGETHER or it does not. I believe that the (I)nternet has a positive aspect ON this subject. To begin with, the (I)nternet help people share information.Thanks to THE (I)nternet, peoPle can communicate with other people in an easy way. For instance, one who is far away from his/her country can talk WITH his/her family and friends. To SUM up this, peoPle can use the (I)nternet in AN emergency situations such as wars, earthquake, flood and so forth. By IN this way, people can accompany SYMPATHISE with each other. Secondly, the (I)nternet is the most effective tool in mass communication, especially during the last century. Technology HAS made important progress which includeS the (I)nternet, cell phones and etc. The (I)nternet has become more and more AN important tool because of IT being quick and easy TO USE. People HAVE become busy despite IN SPITE of their jobs, so they want to reach information in the easiEst and moST comfortable way. Because of this the (I)nternet is preferRed more than other discoveries. On the other hand, it can be argued that there IS prejudice and propAganda in the (I)nternet. However, I think because of some unimportant reasons, the (I)nternet should not be entirely accused. If the (I)nternet is cleanSed from these, it can be not only the most effective tool but also the most trustable device.
In conclusion, the (I)nternet helpS not only IN sharING information but also reachES people them, so it has become an indispensable part of our lives. We should use the (I)nternet in the most profitable way. ............................................................................................................................. Gulcano, your punctuation requires your IMMEDIATE ATTENTION. Check it out on Google. Note that Internet begins with a capital I. Please correct these errors before your next posting.
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