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do you agree or disagree drivers of automobiles should be prohibited from using c #1 (permalink) Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:04 pm   do you agree or disagree drivers of automobiles should be prohibited from using c
 

As far as the car accidents which are widely prevalant in today's world are concerned, accidents derive from using cellular phones stand out as the most discussed one.As a consequence, some people think that drivers of automobiles should be prohibited from using cellular phones.I do not agree with this statement because of some reasons.

To begin with cellular phones is needed in emergency situation, it is known that cellular phones are quicker than the other devices.For example, if a driver of automabile meets a injury people on the road, he can call the ambulance by his phone easily.To sum up, when driver suffer from ilness such as heart attack or high blood pressure face with these kind of ilnesses, he can call help thanks to his cellular phone.

When it comes to other factors causing an accident which are more important to be paid more attention, it is a fact that there are a lot of reasons of car accident such as using alcohol before driving, being careless on the road.If we think about the rate of causes of the accidents, we can easily see that accidents resulting from using cellular phones have a smaller pertencage than the others.

It can be argued that prevention is always better than curing.Some people think that the car accident can be eliminated by this way.However, it should be known that every issue cannot be solved by preventing.If people can more care about on this subject than it should be, the car accidents resulting from using cellular phones will happen in less and less number.

In conlusion, cellular phones are the most needed device when we are in a emergency situation so, it has become an indispensable element of our lives.I think that if drivers pay more attantion about using cellular phones while driving, the car accidents can be eliminated easily.

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Re: do you agree or disagree drivers of automobiles should be prohibited from usi #2 (permalink) Tue Jan 11, 2011 15:49 pm   Re: do you agree or disagree drivers of automobiles should be prohibited from usi
 

As far as the car accidents which are widely prevalEnt in today's world are concerned, accidents derivING from using cellular phones stand out as the most discussed one. As a consequence, some people think that drivers of auto-mobiles should be prohibited from using cellular phones. I do not agree with this statement because of some reasons.

To begin with, cellular phones ARE needed in emergency situationS. It is known that cellular phones are quicker than the other devices. For example, if a driver of AN auto-mObile meets aN injury WITH OTHER people on the road, he can call the ambulance WITH his phone easily.To sum up, when A driver sufferS from ilLness such as AN heart attack or high blood pressure, face with these kindS of ilLnesses, he can call help thanks to his cellular phone.

When it comes to other factors causing an accident which are more important to be paid more attention, it is a fact that there are a lot of reasons FOR car accidentS such as using alcohol before driving, being careless on the road. If we think about the rate of causes of the accidents, we can easily see that accidents resulting from using cellular phones have a smaller PERCENTRAGE than the others.

It can be argued that prevention is always better than curing. Some people think that the car accidentS can be eliminated IN this way. However, it should be known that every issue cannot be solved by preventing. If people can more care about on this subject than it should be, the car accidents resulting from using cellular phones will happen in less and less number.

In conClusion, A cellular phone IS the most needed device when we are in aN emergency situation so, it has become an indispensable element IN our lives. I think that if drivers pay more attEntion about using cellular phones while driving, the car accidents can be eliminated easily.
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do you agree or disagree drivers of automobiles should be prohibited from using c #3 (permalink) Thu Sep 15, 2011 22:21 pm   do you agree or disagree drivers of automobiles should be prohibited from using c
 

I think cell phone use should be banned while driving because you see too many examples of car accidents from people who are talking while driving. Texting while driving is even more dangerous than that. I think if you are caught on your phone while driving more than once you should have a harsh penalty on you such as a high fine or higher Auto insurance quote . Those are just a few examples.
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