#2 (permalink) Tue Jan 11, 2011 15:49 pm Re: do you agree or disagree drivers of automobiles should be prohibited from usi |
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As far as the car accidents which are widely prevalEnt in today's world are concerned, accidents derivING from using cellular phones stand out as the most discussed one. As a consequence, some people think that drivers of auto-mobiles should be prohibited from using cellular phones. I do not agree with this statement because of some reasons. To begin with, cellular phones ARE needed in emergency situationS. It is known that cellular phones are quicker than the other devices. For example, if a driver of AN auto-mObile meets aN injury WITH OTHER people on the road, he can call the ambulance WITH his phone easily.To sum up, when A driver sufferS from ilLness such as AN heart attack or high blood pressure, face with these kindS of ilLnesses, he can call help thanks to his cellular phone. When it comes to other factors causing an accident which are more important to be paid more attention, it is a fact that there are a lot of reasons FOR car accidentS such as using alcohol before driving, being careless on the road. If we think about the rate of causes of the accidents, we can easily see that accidents resulting from using cellular phones have a smaller PERCENTRAGE than the others.
It can be argued that prevention is always better than curing. Some people think that the car accidentS can be eliminated IN this way. However, it should be known that every issue cannot be solved by preventing. If people can more care about on this subject than it should be, the car accidents resulting from using cellular phones will happen in less and less number.
In conClusion, A cellular phone IS the most needed device when we are in aN emergency situation so, it has become an indispensable element IN our lives. I think that if drivers pay more attEntion about using cellular phones while driving, the car accidents can be eliminated easily. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: A very weak essay Cansu, plus poor punctuation and some spelling errors. Please buy a dictionary and check out your punctuation.
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