A person's childhood years are the most important years of a person's life.

[Sweetcandle]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years old age) are the most important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Childhood years are the most important period in a person life. In this period of our life we believe everything and anything our parents and friends told us. Innocent, white heart and spontaneous are common characters in all children. All what we care about are a beautiful toys and innocent children like us to play with them. It's a beautiful period indeed; yet, I don't think it's the most important period on our life for many reasons.

First and foremost, I think people remember us by what we do in our life. Hence, if we had the ability to stop the time and stay children forever we will have a good life with no problems. Yet, we won't be able to build ourselves and reach our goals because children only worry about toys and playing. Therefore, even if growing up means that we will face difficulties and problems on the other hand, it also means that we will be able to grave our names in this life and make a difference.

Second, I think that grown up people have more privet life. They can decide and do things without asking anyone. In contrast, children are not qualified to decide what they want to do. They are independent; their parents take all the decisions. When I was a child I kept dreaming of the day that I would grow up and be dependent. I always dreamed of going to the school alone without the guide of my parents.

Finally, every periods of our life had its advantages and disadvantages. Childhood is a perfect period and many people thought that it's the most important period in our life. As person who adores privacy and independent life I will chose grown up life.
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P.S. again I added the pressure of timing to my essay :( I wrote this in 30 min please correct my essay my exam after 1 month ... I miss Kitos , I really need him those days can't wait to see him again here.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two students at their university cafeteria

[Babo]

[Sweetcandle]

Thanks Babo, I highly appreciate it :)

[Babo]

:). When Kitos will be back, he will better check your essay than I did.
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[Beeesneees]

Childhood years are the most important period in a person'S life. In this period of our life we believe everything and anything our parents and friends TELL us. AN Innocent, white heart and SPONTANEITY are common characters in all children. All THAT we care about are a beautiful toys and innocent children like us to play with them. It's a beautiful period indeed; yet, I don't think it's the most important period OF our life for many reasons.

First and foremost, I think people remember us by what we do in our life. Hence, if we had the ability to stop the time and REMAIN children forever we WOULD have a good life with no problems. Yet, we WOULDN'T be able to DEVELOP ourselves and reach our goals because children only worry about toys and playing. Therefore, even if growing up means that we will face difficulties and problems on the other hand, it also means that we will be able to ENGRAVE/CARVE our names in this life and make a difference.

Second, I think that grown up people have A more PRIVATE life. They can decide and do things without asking anyone. In contrast, children are not qualified to decide what they want to do. They are independent; their parents take all the decisions. When I was a child I kept dreaming of the day that I would grow up and be dependent. I always dreamed of going to the school alone without the GUIDANCE of my parents.

Finally, every periods PERIOD of our life HAS its advantages and disadvantages. Childhood is a perfect period and many people THINK that it's the most important period in our life. As A person who adores privacy and AN independent lifeSTYLE I will choOse A grown up life.
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A good effort within the time-frame. Well done. Take care with tenses, ensuring that where possible you match tenses used in the same paragraph - and definitely in the same sentence. Your punctuation is notably good.
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[Sweetcandle]

Babo: I am sure that he will be proud of you when he comeback here..

Beees: Thanks for correcting my essay and advising me ;)

[NguyenTrg]

Thank Mrs. Beverley ever so much. Kitos knows that you are too busy a life to give attention to essay forum, so even your every little effort is always treasured and valued. On behalf of Kitos, I thank you with all my heart for every your attention here. You are a born Teacher, a brilliant Teacher Mrs. Beverly!!! ( that's also what I heard about you from Kitos ^^)

Yours sincerely,
Nguyen- Kitos' henchman ;-)
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[Sanaulcse]

I strongly agree with the statement "A person's childhood years are most important years of a persons life".beneath i explain some reason against this statement.

At first, every person's childhood minds are soft and flexible.He can easily be influenced by others. If he biased positively by others his mentality build up as positively and vice versa.
Secondly, Childhood is the foundation build up time of ethics, morality, humanity,kindness and so on. If a person's can ensure his ethical foundation in childhood year's , it remains rest of his/ her life.
Thirdly, The key knowledge a person's achieved also during the childhood. A person's can't easily remove from his/her memory the knowledge which he/she achieved during the childhood.
For example , if we see the life of greatman we can easily conclude that their progress start from childhood. The environment of childhood age is enormously important for a person.
The terrorist maximum came from slum, because in their childhood they observe their surrounding polluted environment .
Finally , Childhood is the crucial age for human being . And it also can possible to predict a persons progress in his/her life by observing his/her childhood.
Many scientist specially emphasis on the childhood for a person's progress/growth. When a person became matured there is limited probability to change his/her mentality rather than he follows his childhood habit.

By analyzing these clues we easily can conclude that, a person's childhood year's are most important years of a person's life.

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[Sanaulcse]

please evaluate my essay

[Babo]

Hi Sana I think you are new on this forum. Remember if you post your essay underneath the others' essays, your essay might be neglected. So post your essay in the new topic, then moderators of this forum can evaluate your essay.
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