Get up early in the morning

[Sangthang5]

One of the most difficult things with young people is getting up early. Some of them say that they get up late because they are night owl. However, sometimes, the real reason for that are the late parties or movies. In my opinion, people should try to go to bed soon and start a day soon because of their health, their family and the traffic.

First, getting up early is good for our health, both physical and mental. Everybody knows that a short exercise in the morning makes us feel active all day. Actually, a person who keeps working out every morning will be more longevity than others. An early rising is also the most quiet and fresh time in a day. No need to say, some minutes enjoying the environment around keeps our mental balance and strong.

Second, our family and especially our children need to be taken care at the morning. Even though breakfast is the most important meal in a day, we often quit it because of lacking time. Therefore, spending just fifteen minutes to prepare a nutritious meal is one of the best ways to take care of your family. Furthermore, having breakfast together really makes you and other family members feel closer and happier. It will be a pity if you do not have time for even just a kiss before your child go to school.

Third, driving in the peak hours is one of the worst things to do for a new day. It is a big difference between 7AM and 8AM. If we drive at 7AM, we can go fast, listen to music and enjoy a peaceful morning. However, at 8AM, every driver will be crazy of being late, and they became very aggressive and angry with others. In addition, after you get out of traffic jam, one more thing that might make you nut is: no more free space to park your car. Obviously, going out late in the morning can be very risky for you.

In short, setting the alarm two hours earlier seems to be difficult but if you can do it, you will see that it is worthy. I used to be a night owl and woke up at noon, but I changed my habit. Now I have time for me, for my family and for my work always on time.
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[Soheill]

I disagree with you my friend.Getting up early in the morning dosent cause to health. I dont get up early ig i have not any job.

[Beeesneees]

Hi Soheill,

It doesn't matter whether you agree with the viewpoint or not. There are no right or wrong answers to these questions. The examiners are looking for clearly communicated, well reasoned responses and arguments
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